this novel have a lot of potential BUT it's just not my cup of tea about the talking system and feel weird about it ..sad sad sad sad sadsad sad sad sad sadsad sad sad sad sadsad sad sad sad sad
Never read anything with such a low level of grammar and spelling. Here is a quote from chapter one: "All of us scared, I? of course im scared since im a 40 Years Old man."=> Wow ... all of me is scared, I.
Muito interessante, parabéns.Apenas uma revisão honesta.
Dropping a 10th review so those beautiful stars can show up next to the story. Please feel to enjoy the story, and thanks for any kind words, comments, and appreciations.
a novel more concerned about the management of various people than actually intelligent story-telling. most of the middle ream of this novel revolves around MC saving various relatives, random chicks he meets, and ect... if youre expecting a great adventure full of the exploration into the unknown, dungeon diving, and epic martial arts you've come to the wrong town.the novel tricks you though, the first 500~ or so chapters are really well done, the interactions between the MC and various people FEELS natural, and it takes a grim dark tone that sets you up for a truly intellectual story. but when the MC starts saving all those people, you know youve stepped on a turd, that is more concerned with happy-endings than having an ***** conversation with consequences for actions.a true shame, nothing real here, all intellectually bankrupt.
A breath of fresh air in this OP system or characters world. If you like hard work that prevails and no risk no gains adventures welcome aboard.
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Good start, good premise. The only problem is that your usage of the past tense is wrong, and i think you have this misconception that whenever something is in 3rd person perspective, everything will be written in past tense. That is not entirely correct. Anyway, i love the character development and the world building. Perhaps, spice up the story with some unexpected events.Good luck!
Simply put, it's a novel you read to pass time as you wait for whatever it is you're waiting for. (This review is based on the story so far, written at the latest chapter of chapter 72). The literary quality in the novel is awkward due to grammatical inconsistencies, and the blatancy of the author not proofreading nor editing his/her work. The story started with a interesting premise, but is executed poorly throughout the progression of the novel. We're told the protagonist lived a rat's life in his previous world, but has a mysterious connection to the phenomena of his new world. It is interesting, but it seems the author is just parading with the novel with smoke and mirrors to make it feel mysterious but it truly isn't. Speaking of character design, all the characters are templates. The MC is one-dimensional, with no progression in character nor was there any statements that allows us to better understand him or any other character so far. His character is set in-stone and will probably never have a slight deviation from the start of the novel, or allow us to understand him or any other character better. The world background is fickle, just like a majority of translated novels. There's a lot of locations but they're never fully explored or at least given in-depth treatment to allow us to immerse in them. (The story is still in it's early stages, this just based on the story so far, hopefully it will change).
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The first volume ie. first 40 chapter is amazing. from there the translation switch to MTL mode. Just read the first volume and consider it completed.
I came from the author's different novel and I really love this one as well, with the author's unique way of writings. I always in awe of all the author's books, this one especially has different vibes from the other 2. I love video games and this is will be my third favorite book! Keep writing and I will support you, author!