Spirit_Immortalto
I reviewed it at 5.0 Author Don't worry, Be Happy!And also I haven't started reading this since I still have a long line to check before I proceed on this adventure.
A good book. Of course one of the best stories ever written 5 star rating for you???????????????????? Awesome. ?????
Hahaha, cute vampires trying to rule the world, hun!...Sounds interesting, would be looking forward to it. ................Best wishes with your creation, author.
Mesmo em poucos capítulos a narrativa mostrou potencial, alguns aspectos ainda podem ser melhorados (Como a repetição de algumas palavras, e afins). Mas concluindo, achei legal! Boa Sorte daqui para a frente XD!!
Flattery is defined as praise or compliments, usually exaggerated or false. An example of flattery is a person who's hoping for a raise telling their boss how great their new hair cut looks. i dont do flattery so this will do
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Love it ,please don’t drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very interesting book , nice plot and interesting characters . I can't wait to see how the story progress . Please more updates , more updates
To the people who think this novel is slow or boring what's wrong with your head do you have an attention span of a goldfish or do you need the main character to face slap 30 arrogant young master and save a hundred jade beauties every chapter to be entertained.This is a novel with great pacing and great progression with every improvement feeling like it was deserved unlike some other novels where a magical spirit uncle in a ring given by his parents who disappeared when he was born or maybe you want to read a novel about an OP mc who conquers the world when is 12 years old because his system just gives him unlimited power for doing a couple of push ups.
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I like this one ...it's the best fresh one out here....Nd pls have a request keep the reality in the like u r doin now...it's fine to that mc have power nd stuff but keep it like real nd most likely logical...Nd one suggestion to I would like since u have started a new from the start which is way better than old one ..so in this new don't just focus on one girl like I see in every novel now n then in heram which is that there's always a girl which important than other in mc eyes...which is disturbing...so pls don't make that mistake nd let the girls be unique without pointing to any importance...give the reasonable screening to every girl ...beacuse there are so many examples in every novel I read that authers just forget abt some girls nd most of them are the milfs one like 35+ ones they got in relation have *** nd after that they just won't mention them or just metion them at rendomly ...it's annoying seriously..so pls if u can don't do that... don't skip the some daily life moment with them...cause then it will feel realistic...
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