Hi everyone--- Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to reply to everything - I've been writing this for some time now, and my only hope is that most of you have a good time reading it. I've taken an approach I think is less into the 'typical' video-game genre. If you're expecting a lot of grind, a lot of leveling and item farming you'll be surprised with something different, yet (hopefully) enjoyable.
Great read so far confusing in some parts but overall definitely worth reading
This is some op level content with good planning and mind so yeah deserve a 5 star ⭐
I love this story. I've already finished it. But the ending is too rush.. It was disappointing. I admit, the whole story (except the ending) is amazing and entertaining... He'll just be unlucky all over again..?Extremely disappointed at the ending... I wasted my late nights for this..
This novel is worth to read.. You're such a good writer?.. Ohh my i just can't wait to read the next chapter am so excited ?❤️... You should write more novels too i want to read more of yours.. I wish if i could read the whole novel in one day and night but it's not possible for ya i guess?.. So I'll have to wait off course... Well keep doing your job you're doing well hope your novel would bhi published soon ??.. Keep doing hard work to get your reward ?.. I'll sport ya for this..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHh Screw qidians character count, also good novel only problem is not enough chapters to binge otherwise 5/5
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I really enjoy reading about the deeper emotions and relationship developing between the two of them. I can't wait to read more. I look forward to seeing how their relationship grows.
Ilove your story ilove you
I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing. Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!
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