Spirit_Immortalto
cheated on his girlfriend that he says that he loves so much. i dont support dumb. .
The novel has a cool and fun story but the already bad grammar gets worse after the free chapters, which makes it difficult to read and continue reading the novel.
This is really trash.... can't get past Chapter 1.If you don't believe me just read first chapter.
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This is an okay read but the problem I had is that it is nothing new or different instead of an mc that is trying to do something different we have someone who is praising democracy etc. while doing everything I have already read about already in a different story,I believe this would have been a much better story if instead of instantly trying to turn the country into a democracy he tried his best to maintain his rights as king. This would have been a much better story than what we got.
thanks for commenting, what I have to say is that this story is my first novel, so I have no experience in developing chapters, I always thought of releasing a novel, but when I developed the chapters it was difficult to reach more than 1,500 words that is normal and I was discouraged and gave up, so a teacher of mine told me to write short and see if people read that would encourage me, I did this and seeing the staff commenting makes me happy, I ask you to have patience I will improve with practice.my weakness is the dialogue between the characters, so pay more attention to the story itself and to the development of mc that is my forte.Comment more, but avoid giving only 1 star in the review
The story got me hooked especially the later chapters but seeing how it's been over a month and not even one chapter released , you can say this book is as good as dead. F**king hate these types of authors, first getting you hooked on the book then dropping dead. EITHER DON'T WRITE A BOOK OR FINISH IT TO THE END!!
Poor girl .. the struggle so far … love the way you described every Scene, her emotions .. is like watching a movie ! Can’t wait to see how she his cold stone heart ...️
highly recommended!
do you think this is a game I sent sleepless nights reading only to be left hanging.
Absolutely fascinating, so far
I wonder: is this author North Corean? I imagine such abuse can only take place there! ...
