*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: You said "Break of 3-4 Days" but it has been 3 months, I would suggest if/when you come back to this you set it up to update automatically so that such an issue does not likely happen again.
Positive Feedback: Well written well executed story. Good flow, and I don't notice many if any mistakes.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I'm honestly not really a fan of novels in which the MC makes their own Harem, and really, I tend to stay away from Harem in general for the most part (w/ exceptions being like "Isekai wa smartphone no tomo ni" AKA "In Another World with my Smartphone" where the Harem was forced upon the MC), therefore I will not be continuing this novel.;,;.
Your writing quality seems really good and the story development is interesting. Your stability of story is also a plus point of ur novel. keep writing! one good story
This novel is like a trash chinese version of a Japanese shoujo manga. Literally nothing happens. Another eternal virgin MC who is too much a coward/idiot to make any moves on any girl in this novel. All the girls have the same personality, no plot at all, and becomes more unbearable the further you read. Wouldn’t recommend this to anyone. Use your time in a better way, this novel doesn’t deserve it.
Good Police Ruined By The Trash Mother Is Superior.... Dictating Mc With Useless Blind Dates Every Chapter It To Annoying And Trash .. Author Ruined A Good Novel ..What A Waste
I saw many negative reviews by people who haven’t even tried the novel yet. I don’t know the reason for giving biased review without even reading the novel. I think the plot till now is pretty well thought out. So far the translation is good, story progresses at a steady pace without making reading uncomfortable. Comparing it to the few other cultivation novels it might not be the best as of now but I expect it to well above average. I must say I enjoyed the initial 100 chapter release. With 27 chapter per week it is worth a read.
The worst novel Er`Gen. The world is attractive, but the hero is hysterical. And the system of cultivation of ****. Too high rate for "this"
Oh...very bad
There once was a old man living in a certain town. He was peerless in strength and nobody dared to defy him. One day, he walked in a bar, grabbed a bottle of hard saka and chugged it all down. Suddenly, in a drunken rage, he yelled "Wuxia novels suck!" And he ran out. They found his body 2 days later.
Awesome I love it from chapter twenties ahead.
It is some what there I could continue reading
Just a copy-paste of World of Warcraft, all in all it's a story about a Chinese Gold Farmer back in the time of Vanilla WoW and poorly written with small changes that make the game seem more broken and random.
Very much similar to that one reborn thief novel. I had good hopes at beginning but it just seems like your average vrmorpg nothing to special. Maybe it will get better but most likely not. Good luck to those who stick with it let me know at a later time if it’s worth a read
I did not read this but if you want a similar novel, got to Mtlnation and type--Miniature World: I Was Treated As An Ancient God........................