nice novel
not a new concept but at least he didn't started adding cliches over cliches yet
i have read till ch 25
and not gonna lie it's a great read hope u pick this up might man
ofc to any women reading this pls gloss over
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original :clap: idea :clap:
Pretty unique twist on the cultivation-op-plis-nerf-hax genre-thingo. Enjoyable, good world building, er
Dunno, perhaps one of the edgier cultivation ones out there?
Pretty good. Can't really ****post this.
*tips fedora*
I'm a straight male who doesn't have any thoughts of becoming gay anytime soon. I fear this novel will turn me gay... But I can't stop reading......
The plot is interesting. The characters' interactions are well made and coherent with how the relation between male and female are in that world. I want to know more about the other empires/power and if any man is trying to build a revolution army or something like that with what happens to them when they lose the war.
Good grammar and world development, I'm caught up in the story even though it's still in the baby phase.
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It’s slow but the story gets very interesting as the story goes on. Especially when they get super natural powers and try to kill each other. ☠️
The writing and grammar in this story are horrific at best. I thought i was reading a MTL but then i noticed that even those are more comfortable to read then this. I could only get past 2 chapters and i still have no clue what i just read. the only question i have is what story were the reviewers reading when they wrote there reviews
hello I've just finished reading this book and I Like what I've seen so far( even though it is not much ) so I hope you can release more chapter for a better view and opinion on your book thanks
Really bad grammar like he'd say "vote for my book please" so if you can put up for grammar mistakes very good would recommend.
The start is good but, the emotional aspect feels flat.
Conveying the emotions at the start of novel can be a bit tough but, it's a bit more flat.
The story is good but the time gapes aren't separated properly.
When the girl is killed at the start, I can't connect to them.
You can use some more spacing in paragraphs.
Ultimately... it's good.
The syatem is elaborate and very interesting.
A good read for now.
I think this book has great potential and the story seems great but the grammar can really use some work as it makes the book hard to read.
So far everything is good. It has the ability to invoke emotions out of the reader which makes for an awesome read plus excellent background for the main character and good world building. I wait with batted breath for more chapters too see how far the author can take this book