IF THE CHAPTER COUNT STILL IS 609 DON'T BOTHER TO PICK THIS UP!The story in itself is okay. Characters are fine. But that's it. Its okay to read and I enjoyed it even. But qidian needs to find a translator to finish this up. So as long they don't find someone taking the project over don't bother to start.
I am back. As I promised, a review after reading 200+ chapters. Currently I have read till chapter 400, so I believe I might be able to shed some more light on this story and what you can expect.To began with, I am reading this through raws, so I can't comment on translator quality or stability of update. But, from the already released 60 chapters, the translation quality is readable but not exactly upto the bar.One thing I like about the story is it's simplicity. Until now, author has stayed true to the main theme of the story : collecting debt and bringing back the bank to its former glory. Most CN stories seem to forget why they started the story. Everything just seems to spiral out of control. Every arc will have its own mission. There is no end goal.But here you can see what the story is about. MC doesn't deviates from ut. It does has smaller arcs but they are there to support and fill in the main theme. Another thing which makes me like this story more is short filler arcs. Oh, there are fillers arcs, short side story arcs, supporting chapters and what not. But author clearly recognises on where to stop. You won't find stupid tournament arcs or trasure hunting arcs stretching over several tens of chapters. Coming to the MC. He's OP. Which actually suits the theme of the story. He doesn't acts like your genric OP MC. You won't find him bullying people or slaughtering families. In fact, he rarely leaves the bank. It's mostly his ever increasing group of subordinates who collect debt. Only when they kick a hard stubble will the MC come to deal with it.Now about his personality. Please don't expect proper character building and depth. He's no character from ASOIF or something from the hands of Sanderson, Abercrombie or Butcher. He's quite simple and honestly, one dimensional. One thing in his favour is his modern sensibilities.Atleast until now I haven't seem him having any inclination for harem. Infact he dislikes harem. So harem haters will definitely like this. He's not dense and something is building between him and Seven. It's not romance but there are flirting moments here and there. I won't spoil it further but its pretty good for a non romantic CN novel.And yes he's not stupid. You can see why he's making a deal. He knows when he can rip someone off and when he has to stay neutral. Pretty good imo.One thing which ticks me off, is side charcter development. They are fanatical in belief to the level of zealots. The angels have NO character growth or development. They are like NPCs to help the MC. Only needed when a side quest requires it. Pretty sad. They could have fleshed out the story further. But I can see that author wants to play safe. Dealing with multiple characters is not a simple task. You need to balance the fine line between too less and too much.World development is a bit icky. You have ten mortal world's, nine immortal worlds and one big celestial/divine world. The raw terms are a bit confusing so please forgive me if these do not match the translation. The world is not exactly fleshed out. You know it's there but that's it. It's both good and bad. You don't have long arcs wasted on/in other worlds but at the same time , you don't have much impression of those worlds.I haveany more things to say, but I will story here. I will just summarise the whole review.Pro : 1: Single goal. No nonsense targets or anything.2: Very less filler.3: No Harem.4: MC with modern sensibilities.5: MC is not stupid Cons :1: one dimensional character.2: Zealot subordinates and no development.3: No world development.Note :1: OP MCThat's it for now. Cya.
Translation quality continuing to fall made me drop this. Translator seems to be using a MTL to translate, fixing most grammatical errors but completely ignoring the context. I wouldn’t be surprised if he didn’t have a clue what was going on in the story. I wish there was a way to report these translators to WebNovel since they essentially employ these scam artists.
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Website : qidian china Views : 7.52 million Rating : 8.2(447) Chapters : 1333Status : ongoing Word count : 3.32 million author rank : platinum
ii really like this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is a really good novel,it has it's issues but that's ok. It would be interesting to see if the mc could use more than 1 extra ability when his limiter is removed, maybe be even able to fuse abilities and make insane attacks
Hey, guys. I leave a message here today to congratulate that we have come so far. Chapter 400 until now. Thank you so much for your great supports. Without you, I might have already given up. Thank you, again!
One of the my most favorite novel right now. There are some flows, but it doesn't stop this novel from being really interesting. While most of the negative review complain about MC being a bit beta, that because this novel is not a R-18; it more focus on comedy for all age. So, I'm not agree with those complain. Recommend for most people as long as you don't expect too much of the novel and only looking for pure entertainment.
Sobefore even reading i already know what he does, he hangs out with cliche people who have a protagonist aura(smth similar)Then when the luck happens, he also gets the stuff. Since he has done it with a lot of people, others think he has heaven defying luck.
trash he has a god complex when he met god before he reincarnated
even after 10chI was looking forward to reading the kingdom building nd wars. but I don't even get eased into our ml returning to his territory before a female shows up to insert herself into the novel. I'm turned of from the potential most likely partner?? of our ml. like maybe if you have eased into potential candidates once I have built repoire with my ml I can be okay with it. but the mf starts out witha damsel in distress, that the ml saves, and his lust? and her throwing her body to him to save her issue irks me. I mean the ml tried to put his foot down and not go that route , but they end up doing it don't know each other she brings nothing to our ml but family issues , she's not even strong so what..... y do I have to read about their ship before he actually works on his territory or fights a war. uhhhhhh , it turned me off so bad so gotta rate 2/5. you may not like like my review, but thebwriting seems promising and if you can get past what i didn't like that the ml didn't even settle and he is thrown into a forced union then u can continue past. but author if you had let the readers build rejoice with the ml, see the personalities more of the potential love intrest I wouldn't have been so turned off. and she may be written as a supportive , good wife potential but the first encounter was bad.