hello just me shifter here giving this novel a 10/10 AS I ALWAYS DO I THE ARCHITECT SHALL JUDGE THIS NOVEL WHEN I READ IT BE.AFRAID.OF.ME
It's really good, definitely recommend.The story about demon girl who's actually has a real "sense" about her own kind, descending into a mortal realm just to find normality of daily life her own kind cannot afford. I see a lot of potential in this story, especially that naive demon girl.Overall, the narration is very vivid yet complex, easy yet interesting to understand if you have very good imagination since there are many implied messages and foreshadowing future which is very nice, especially in monologues, and environment descriptions.In conclusionTen out of ten
Hello, Author here you might already notice I rated myself pretty poorly for writing quality and updates for the chapters. This is because I still am a high school student. Obviously, my grammar will not be top-notch. I will try my best to fix these errors, however, there is a limit to how well I will do. I'm working on getting an editor so hopefully the writing quality will improve, but for now, if you hate grammar mistakes then I don't recommend you read this story. And of course, during the school year, my chapters rate might be pretty inconsistent. Oh, and those of you worried that I might include some weird teenage fantasies don't worry I will keep that in check (;
HANDSOME FEMALE LIKE CUTE BEAUTY PROTAGONIST, COLD INDIFFERENT ATTITUDE, DARK PROTAGONIST, BATTLE MANIAC, OVERPOWERED, REINCARNATED PROTAGONIST.TSK.. TSK just like what I wanted ?
Nope nope nope nope. First chapter alone the amount of grammar mistakes makes me want to gouge my eyes out. This is a non native english speaker and maybe a terrible translator with it. Either missing words so you have to go back and read sentence again for it to kind of make sense or they just don't make any sense at all
The capture of racist bullying in the opening passages was really done well. The self-talking and the acceptance of getting bullied were eerily relatable to me?.But there are quite a few problems. Hope you don't get me wrong. I kindly wish you to correct some grammatical issues in your writing. And keeping multiple dialogues of multiple characters together in a single passage could impact the reader (saw it on a review for another work ages ago)Otherwise, it's a good story and has some strong characters with great potential. All the best?
Now I'm enjoying it and i hope he doesn't drop it
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The story has a bit grammatical errors and the length of the chapters are short, it not a minus point but still try to make a little longer.The storyline is good and unique, the updating stability is good and the description are well written. Good luck Author. Keep writing and you will make it big someday.
Truthfully although the concept of this book is fascinating it is not really worth it to me. It is riddled with so much grammatical error that it is hard to read, there are plot holes I can't ignore, let's not talk about the character development. It is a typing cliche mc is the only person worth paying attention too novel, I guess some people like that but I don't. The mc gets power and kills out all the nobles in the kingdom. WTF. Cringe. The other princes are just.....
When you coming back man/woman? We still want to see where the story leads to and ends.