Wings of Momentum

Just read it. It's fun and worth your time. I am only a few chapters in but I can say that it'll be interesting ahead. It is a very dark one. Might be the darkest one so far. Though it gets more better after 20 chapters and the development is cool.It doesn't look fast paced and the very element is well written.One thing i have to say about this book is it's so great and has such a nice plot and it seems to be pretty attractive towards readers and the main thing, keep. going Author and it's really great

Overall a very good novel with great worldbuilding and a clever and not dense protagonist. Although at the beginning there are some nonsensical pieces of the story that don’t really make sense like how he has so much money left and some other things. The first part is a bit hard to sit through but once you get to the second part of the novel with “Maria’s world” which is just your typical D&D world to an extent. I find the power system in this novel to be quite nice and refreshing as it’s a classic “the research of power” novel as in the MC carves the path of his power by himself.I also like how the main character developsover the course of gaining his powers. Something else I like is the great character development and focus of the “side characters”. Most of my praise for this novel goes to the second part of the novel and beyond because in my opinion the novel knly gets better from there.Thus I highly recondmend that you try out this novel!

The capture of racist bullying in the opening passages was really done well. The self-talking and the acceptance of getting bullied were eerily relatable to me?.But there are quite a few problems. Hope you don't get me wrong. I kindly wish you to correct some grammatical issues in your writing. And keeping multiple dialogues of multiple characters together in a single passage could impact the reader (saw it on a review for another work ages ago)Otherwise, it's a good story and has some strong characters with great potential. All the best?

It's like I wanna keep reading since the world that this story is taking place in is interesting and it's got me hyped up but man the grammar is kinda killing it for me. But that's about it, excluding the grammar and overall it's a pretty good story so far from what I've gotten to read.

bro make this story some more Serious so it become more enjoyable for me

Geat stuff. MTL? Anyone???Mamsmsnsmsm