No, I can only give 5 to your novel. If the rating is 100, I will give it to you without hesitation. We will just wait for the end. I am very excited. I want to meet you until you give me your signature.
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Excellent story but I wish there was a clear representation of the power levels.
Few chapters yet i am hooked in this story already! The ancient times value the strength of the man but this story is different. I will follow the adventure of the two swordswomen.
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Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If anyone knows the raw can you tell me its really annoying how the webnovel creators just got rid of the original title at the bottom just so we cant go to other websits.
I have noticed from other reviews, that claim the author repeats words/sentences/paragraphs to increase word count. I am at chapter 180+ at the moment and have not noticed this at all. There are minor grammatical errors throughout the chapters, but the reader can easily interpret what is being said/stated. Spoilers:My major concerns are that things are not explained well at all. The MC gets a mission fairly early on, which requires him to go and save a girl and her family. The reward is that the girl will become his girlfriend. Why this girl in particular? He was forced to travel to the other side of the globe, but he has never met this person or her family before. What made this girl so special instead of saving someone a little closer to home? The story went from barely PG-13 to R-18 fairly abruptly. At least the author actually puts R-18 into the title to forewarn the readers. The author seems to forget about plot threads completely. The MC is given a side quest in chapter 49. We as readers know that he goes above and beyond what is required of him, and yet there is no mention of him ever receiving the reward. In multiple chapters, the MC asks his system how to help a paralyzed little girl walk again. The system says that she needs to eat level 30+ beast meat for her to regain the ability to walk. The MC has killed multiple beasts that are level 30+, and yet the author has completely disregarded the little girl and we as readers have no idea how she is doing. The MC is rewarded for killing creatures who are well above his level. However, this seems to be fairly arbitrary. At one point, he kills a creature 20+ levels above his own, and there is no mention of a special reward for killing the creature. Part of his rewards at one point, are potions to forcefully evolve someone as well as the ability to completely heal someone of the zombie virus if bitten. However, after receiving these items, the author makes no mention of giving them out except to say that evolving naturally is more beneficial than using a potion. He has scientists who are studying the virus and have stated they have personally made a cure to the virus. This plot thread was dropped like a bag of rocks.The author seems to forget how skills work, especially his original Bear Passive skill (I forget what its called). It is supposed to give him something like +1 Strength and Stamina every 3 days. However, this is not reflected in his character sheet at all. Multiple months have gone by, but his character sheet barely changes at all. The author also only has the MC distribute stats in multiples of 5. So if the MC wants to increase both Strength and Stamina for example, he saves up skill points for 2 full levels before distributing them instead of say 2 for Strength and 3 for Stamina. While I understand doing it this way makes it easier to keep track of how point are distributed, someone living in an apocalyptic world would not have this luxury. it is for these reasons why I give my overall review.
Wonder if the MC will be similar to how the old master of the comic "Master of lightning knives". Interested in reading about a nice bond developing. There's other novels with the same premise on this platform, but they tend to go downhill. Comedy keep the story alive.
"Explore the dark abyss shrouded in darkness"... you know I would have guessed that a place called the dark abyss would all bright sunny and full of bunnies and unicorns.No but seriously. Interesting concept but a despairing lack of creativity pushes this novel amongst the rest of Webnovels meh book pile.
La historia puede empezar un poco lenta y desconocida ya que siempre trato de leer fanfic pero es un historia interesante que cada día va mejorando y lo mejor hasta el día de hoy no se si donde llegara eso es lo bueno de una historia original nunca se sabe que tendrá
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