Westernizing novels is a great indication of the current state of this app.1. Stealing novels and rewriting them, breaking/abusing global copyright laws.2. Trash translations.3. These stories are mediocre at best, every single trial read is not worth looking into if they are not from a credible author and or translator.4. Novels chosen for voting pool often get dropped by the translators when no one is supporting them. And no one is supporting them because they're either the same as other webnovels or other viable reasons.For this novel, it is not that bad. But the immersion is broken for me when it's clearly been changed heavily by the translator. Truly, it feels like they white-washed everything to fit the intended audience, but ended up backfiring on them instead. Ruins the experience.
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Ok so this book is great, the evil mc with a deep hatred against humans is what makes this story stand out from the rest of the vampire novels. However I don't particularly like the idea of Vampires being shown as the weakest race or believed to be so, as to me what makes Vampires unique is their arrogance and superiority complex and the deep fear they struck in the hearts of humans.
Hello good sir I was scrolling through your novel and I could not help but see the potential in it... So I was wondering if you would like a part time native English speaker to help you edit your work
The book was very good and very well written... The pace of the story is a little slow in the initial chapters... But you need to build the momentum for the plot, so totally acceptable. And character development and story background is really well shown. And I felt like the chappys are a little long for me too keep reading hehe... It is better to keep the chappys length in between 1.2k - 1.8k words. That way more lazy people like me would read more n your chappy count will be increased. Just my opinion XD a very well written... Keep up the good work. Cheers.
I dunno why the rating is so low, this is an amazing novel if you want an action-filled tale that has a ton of game elements. The description makes the novel sound like slapstick but the MC is actually really smart and the MC and his group spend almost all of their time fighting for their lives so while there are definitely comedic moments its not all fun and games (far from it the MC started chain smoking due to stress lol). Anyway give it a read if you need a break from traditional cultivation novels
I really liked this book. Shame it didn’t get picked. The mc is pretty funny trying to find a reason to do certain things like taking someone’s money.
Fouth wall breaks are everywhere and annoying, definitions on whats happening is excessive but only non useful info that we dont need. Keeps putting stuff like *slaps his forehead* which is really annoying and unnecessary you dont need to put the star signs and you dont need to keep making the characters actions over excessive and skips important info like what happen when kin fell in chap 5, you also skipped alot about the characters and their personalities. Also you could just write it like this. Ken was talking to the white ball, when suddenly his parents walked into his room. But soon Ken realized that his parents couldnt see the white ball of light and immediately calmed down. He then asked the ball of light “They can’t see you?” the ball of light then replied “ Yes, your are the only one who can see me.” Ken was surprised by this and soon became curious as to how.OrKen then spotted a light in the distance and realized it was the same kind of light he saw when he first met Will, Ken then realized that it was another important character and became excited. When Ken made it to the character and realized it was a girl and injured he became worried, so he and his father who was also running beside him helped the girl back to his house via teleportation along side Will.
Really amazing story, I love it.Interesting characters and storyline so far.....Just pls don't be BL as I am kinda getting those vibes...
Damn, that first chapter.. HAHAHA, the MC has indeed a dirty mouth and can't stop cursing for his dear life. I remember someone while calling the company who he thinks scammed him.. lolz, so I was laughing so hard when I read the argument.Nonetheless, the novel is quite good eventho I only read first chapter.
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Well Shit, you got me with this amazing story. The Story Is very interesting and unique and i really it. I hope the author wouldn't drop itTHE THING GO SKRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA