It's a wonderful story ... love every chapter... But can u plz upload atleast two chapters a day .... Esp these new scenes ... can't wait for the next upload .
What should I say? I want to give this novel the lowest possible score if not for me considering the hardwork of the translator. First of all, this novel has good world background and story development because the author just copies and steals other people's ideas. The author tried to copy multiple ideas and compile it as his own, but failed miserably. Most of what made up this story are stolen from Fallout series' lore, example of which are the deathclaws, mutated humans researched by the government, the project of eden, the fallout vaults, and most of the lore of fallout but the author just patched fallout's lore with other stories' ideas to fit his narrative. Because the author is lacking of imagination or is lazy, he even stole ideas from conspiracy stories, and went as far as using other people's name; Is it that fucking hard to think of a name? To top it all off, the b*tch of an author is a racist himself, what a f*cktard. Yes I am biased because the author ruined the fucking story by adding his racist ideas. I repeat, the premise of this novel is good because it is ripped off of other people's intellectual property, and as far as I know the author seems to not even give credits to where he got those ideas from.
This novel was one of the best fantasy stories I’ve ever read! It was action packed, dramatic, and entertaining. Tons of laughs and even a tear jerker or two! I’ve grown to love certain characters and hate others. I felt like I was there experiencing this ride with them!I couldn’t stop reading, after about 4 chapters I was hooked! I can’t wait to read more from this author!!!
female characters can be made more diverse or unique.. . everyone fits the same templet.. but cant be blamed too much as they are all under a spell.. if u think them as slaves for the spell then makes sense... or else too much negligence on the part of author while writing them.. the powers and fantasy elements are good.. and overall a good causual binge read
A good novel. Hope author keeps writing.I enjoyed the brothel buusiness building. Would have like it if he enjoyed the employees iyky I like stories where the mc is actually supported by the family resources. Having the mc go against the family in other stories is so cliche.Action is decent and pretty fun.Recent chapters are awesome kingdombuilding sections.I have read so many kingdombuilding light novels. If you can ignore some grammar errors and follow the story youll like this. Also world building is decent.I recommend a good kingdombuilding novel called rome must fall. Its written by author of the Mediterranean hegemony novel.
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i really liked the theme its just that i cant relate mark being romance candidate or am i like a father that dont want his daughter get married hahahahah but anyways the way i read is that i imagine my self being the mc and my dao heart is only for female if the fmc have male partner ill imagine myself bieng the ml but i cant relate to mark hhha maybe this heavenly test to my dao heart ill persevere i will read this just for the mother and daughter duo!!!!!!!!
sigh....I have been waiting an eternity for the author to continue this great story.so listen to my ranting Title: A Heartfelt Tribute to a Talented AuthorIt is with a bittersweet mix of emotions that I write this heartfelt review for an author who, regrettably, chose to discontinue their remarkable book. With every page, this author effortlessly transported readers into a captivating world filled with vivid characters and gripping narratives. Their talent for storytelling was nothing short of extraordinary, leaving readers hungry for more with each passing chapter.The author's prose danced across the pages, weaving a tapestry of emotions that resonated deeply with readers. The characters they created were multidimensional, flawlessly capturing the essence of the human experience. From moments of heart-wrenching vulnerability to exhilarating triumphs, the author had an unparalleled ability to make us laugh, cry, and reflect on our own lives.As the story unfolded, the author skillfully wove intricate plotlines that kept us on the edge of our seats, yearning for resolution. The twists and turns were unexpected yet satisfying, revealing a masterful command of storytelling and a keen understanding of pacing.It is a profound loss for readers and literary enthusiasts alike that this author made the difficult decision to halt their book's progress. The world they created was a sanctuary, a place to escape to and find solace during challenging times. Their absence will be deeply felt, as the characters and their stories have become a cherished part of our literary landscape.However, despite the disappointment of an unfinished tale, I remain grateful for the chapters we were able to experience. This author's words have left an indelible mark on our hearts, reminding us of the power of literature to transport, inspire, and transform.To the author, though you may have chosen a different path, your talent and imagination have left an indelible imprint on the literary world. Your book will forever hold a special place in the hearts of those who had the privilege of embarking on that journey with you.As readers, we will eagerly await the day when your pen finds its ink once again, and your words grace the pages of another captivating tale. Until then, we offer our sincerest gratitude for the extraordinary gift of your storytelling and the emotions you evoked through your artistry.May your future endeavors be filled with success and fulfillment, and may the world once again be captivated by your boundless imagination and literary prowess.With the deepest appreciation,[Nameless]
I liked the way the back ground has been elaborated including how the sword looks. If you are imaginative and can visualise , the author has successfully taken you to the land of Magic. I also liked the way the plot begins which keeps you on your toes. Let me not be a spoiler here. Amazing beginning. Thumbs up author.
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How come u stopped writing?? Its a good book so I dont want to see if stop!!
?% garbage ?️?️?️ annoying , SIMP, guided by the nose, this is the MC of this novel.and this what i know of til i drop it.and the Author .... SIGH.