VanTan
Not bad, not bad at all. The premise was interesting and I didnt feel bored.
The overall writing quality was decent and there weren't flaws that struck me as 'glaring'. Though the pacing was steady for most of the first chapter it did feel a little iffy at certain parts but I guess that could very well be a deliberate thing from the author.
This is a good read and if you've stumbled in here wondering whether you should read this or not, the answer is, yes, you should.
wow this is a talented writer.The story setup and plot is great I read chapter one thinking it will be about this family who moved and started a life got new friends.Thought it be like a typical love story.But then I paged and realized the title is exactly what it says it is Dark honor, Honouring loyality with distrust this is a great book!!!!!!!!!
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4.6 stars. That 0.2 under the mark it have when I'm writting this. Its to show im mad withoud being a d**** and give 0 start.
I didn't read the book. Not even one word. BUT PLEASE try to work on synopsys. Its empty the only thing you know is : isekai (so like 99% of stuff on wb) and MC a spoiled brat ?
Would you chose a book where the only thing you know is MC is a spoiled brat ?
Maybe you like spoiled brat so much that its a godwin point for you author, but im not sure for the rest of the world.
Anyways probably won't read. *Except if next time I click the synopsys catch my eye cough cough*
have a nice day
bad english maybe idk
I thought this story is gonna be interesting cuz the title and synopsis looks so. Well, it's interesting at first but it gets boring eventually. There's too much unnecessary information.
Extremely one-dimensional characters. The enemies somehow are too weak and too strong at the same time(similar to MC who at the same time has "strongest physique" and yet isn't as strong as other superhumans although it's never established that them being superhuman longer makes their physique stronger). The lvl 1000 grandpa in the library trope is just lazy. Wouldn't pick it based on avilable chapters.
Stupid hero has nothing to do with Fang Yuan, I embarrassed Fang Yuan's nameStupid hero has nothing to do with Fang Yuan, I embarrassed Fang Yuan's name
I gave such a low score because suddenly am tossed into dbz Universe and since i read some n watch some dbd so i understood a lik bit of this but otherwise Fresh people who havent wAtched or Read any dbz have no clue Who is who because their was no world building and i dont even know who the mc is oR his story because their was no character build. The fight scene also was written cheaply got to aDd some more into it but its underStanable since your knew nice try? like they say all writers begin small good luck On your quest for greatness ?
amazing book to read. really hope its one of the ones that continues to get translates since its got a pretty cool storyline to read and has some pretty interesting characters.
i really loved but it needed more detalils like how did they engineered the brotherds and agave them powers how did they reseted maverick, and if maverick has nany friends and give some more eneral context plus they were too much grammar errors
All I can say is that there is a new cliche at every turn> I honestly expected something new and fresh but there are young masters, selling charms, and sparing enemies left and right.All the characters are one-dimensional, even the mc himself.And when I say cliche, I meant this book has the most cliches I have seen in every novel I have ever read, which is a lot. I think the only reason this book doesn't have negative reviews is because nobody bothered to read it, or they were deleted.
