This is really well done,. Character,plot,romance all well done and doing good so far so I hope this gets picked. It can be very addictive if you like the genre.
the setting of the story is simply flawless and I like the way you write the tone of your story . but there are some flaws likerepeatationsome grammar mistakes also you should give the clear idea what is actually happening in the first chapter. web novel readers aren't patient enough to read for too muchyou should start simple and end with complex text
It's really good!! Gimme more!! I love the two of them they're so sweet <3<3 If you don't read this... it's your fault. But I need more chapters! tell me what happens next!!
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yo this is amazing. i usually ate chinese novels because of all the cliches and propaganda. but this is really good, funny and very heart warming. he doesnt get any of the girls randomly but its a slow satsifying proccess. keep it up
Well it have some promise but too many people act stupid or unreasonably here because author don't want to work hard on writing.
Still the concept have some promise.
an unusual beginning for such stories, I hope the author will not lose his chance to write a great novel (and will not hit a jumping cultivation), well, it's over I wanted it to remain free:p
I am rating you five stars.
Your story plot is very nice!
Apart from a few grammatical errors,
Everything is fine
Nice plot too
And one thing I like about it is that you always update on time
Never seen such a frustrating MC, I'm leaving
Simply- humorous and witty with a regular game world, but expect laughs.
The world is complex and is as you would expect of a game world, simple mechanics that work for any game novel, levels, monsters and
pretty ladies
A fairly silly wish fulfilment series, but if you read the description above you likely knew that. It's everything you'd expect, good or bad, from that description.
It is also a fairly simple read, but some might find it hard to ignore how dumb people are and the eating of intelligent humanoids near the start.
Good work