one of the best naruto novel in the current market but I want to ask author , he has tailed beast level chakra then why not use shadow clones to perfect his techniques? he can easily send shadow clones to learn his other elements , medical ninjutsu , and rune mage craft. he can even train his chakra control to a perfect level with shadow .clones . why are you not using his full potential? and please don't leave him with only 5 elemental seeds give him other elemental seeds as well. and you even nerfed his elemental seed because he has no need to use normal lightening. he can use black lightening in his attacks or you can give him one more elemental seed hopefully yin elemental to practice mind arts so that he doesn't have a weakness or you can give him a yin yang elemental seed to upgrade his great way of Buddha technique and learn mind arts and soul arts together. i hope you will include these in the novel as it will be more interesting . and you can forget worrying about being op as you can give him an order by sacthach to lower his stats than his enemy to force his techniques upgrading.
I really hope that this is gonna get chosen for voting once again. It baffles me that somehow this didn´t get picked last time. These days most of the trial-reads are basically garbage. Though there are some exceptions like this one.
excellent character design but the first 50 chapters are torture I never heard of an MC that suffered so much I am sure the author is M LOL
Give it a try, I enjoyed reading it.
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The power system is not bad but it's got worse when it inherited all the stupidity of eastern cultivation novels eg discrimination of the weak yet powerful, stupid elders who picks sides and sect master who's just a face, weak sect deciples with overgrown egos. Stupid brothers the list goes on
Don't read novel is dropped I wasted my time don't yours
Really love this novel, I recommend it to everyone that likes evil MCs, It's fantastic, especially the powers and the personality of all the characters. The MC's bearing is also superb. Top rate.
The story is not too bad, it is basically a first work of attempt by an author, with many *** scenes and many cliches.
My biggest problem is that the MC ended up raping a character, he hears aphrodisiac drugs involved, even though it wasn't the MC himself that made the woman look like this, I couldn't keep reading.
I have seen cases where women at parties were drugged or were heavily drunk and were raped.
Esim, this is rape, you have *** with someone who is not aware or under strong drug effects, it is rape, and even though the author tried to justify things, the character of the MC at that point for me, was worth less than rubbish.
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This was pretty awesome for a short story. I would love to read a world based from this. Good job. Nice background and storyline. Fights could use a bit more gorey details but it didn't detract from the quality.
I really liked the designing of the plot!
It can easily hook up the readers.
Great job in the storyline!
Keep it up Author-nim ❤️
Please keep updating.
Thank you great Webnovel Editors for taking our opinion into consideration. Although it's really sad that some of the previous great novel drop, but I'm still mad at you about the Game Designer novel part.