A great novel! So first, writing quality. The writing quality is absolutely fabulous, the author doesn't have to change a thing. Second is stability, the book is too new to rate this so I gave it 4 stars. The story development is insane right now, I can't wait for the next chapter, it drives me crazy. Character design seems a lot like the kings avatar with just a worse history, waiting to see how the character grows. World background, again, is kind of cliche. Just waiting to see its uniqueness. Overall, great novel so far, try taking a read at it, it might just surprise you.
Even though there are a lot of stories about gaming and computer but this one is unique in all of them, the world background, character, and grammar is really good.
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all I can is that I love the book.
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Finally found a good novel.
This book bites my imagination and the continuous description of events and scientific experiments got me glued. The writer's imaginations are thick and solid not everyone has the mind to write a scientific novel but you did. Godspeed.
Have read till chapter 14, found no grammatical errors, story seems going in the right direction, the pacing is just right and honestly I can't point out any flaw in this story till chapter 14. I hope you maintain this quality and publish more chapters, I need more of them.
oh i just forgot to write a review to this one. .. this novel is good and the harem is nice, no one left or something like that. .. and im currently at chapter 382 or 362?
really a racist novel, there's a 50-50 chance of anyone being demon but everyone decides that demons are the bad guy and law enforcers are good guys. when demon got powers they did bad things and law enforcers had a sence of justice and even if some demon loots the bank or something, the law enforcers with a "justice" mind decides that all demons are bad. and for normal demons(except MC) leaving their demon layer would be fatel as enforcers can destroy their layer while they're away, so demons shouldn't cause as much troubles as a enforcer would!
I like how the story starts, I can't express this enough. The intrigue built up by the interstellar-esque, rather, space adventure is really gripping, and the feeling carries through to the end of the first chapter. I do feel that disjointed feel between the first and second chapter needs some revision, but the continuing of the plot line that gripped me in the next chapter is really good.