This is very enjoyable! It takes original themes and changes them up so it's not the same as everything else! I totally recommend this story!
Good novel, I like the topic that you have with this and hope you post more chapters to this, because it can go big and be a big hit! ❤️
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Loved it! Would love to lose my memory just to read it again. I think of writing a fanfic about this story and hope you're okay with that.
Stupid character limit...
Son Goku
Vegeta
Bulma
Trunks
Goten
Gohan
I think thats enough characters. See ya!
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Good book with good ideas plz keep up the good work and plz continue with the wrighting...nice cover for the book.. wish there was more to the book
4 star because it has harem in the long run and the momentum it has in the early chapter will disappear. Good novel, this one is kinda unique and funny for me.Sadly, novel with harem tags will get wrecked in the long run just like some novels that is good in early to mid chapters.
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MC IS A COWARD, STUPID AND A SHUT -IN NERD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS TOO SLOW I MEAN LITERALLY AFTER HE TRANSMIGRATES THE FIRST THING HE DOES IS TRYING TO RUN EVEN THOUGH HE CLEARLY KNOWS THAT HE IS IN A FAIRLY OVERPOWERED BODY AND THAT RABBIT DEMON IS 2 WHOLE LEVELS LOW IN COMPARISON BUT NOOOOO HE STILL TRIES TO RUN BUT I READ IT SOMEHOW TILL 55+ CHAPTERS AND IT WAS STARTING TO GET BETTER BUT MC WHO REALLY DOESNT KNOW HOW THE CULTIVATION WORLD WORKS ACCEPTED DISCIPLES AND NOT EVEN TRYING THAT ZEALOUS MAKING TECHNIQUES BECAUSE THERE IS STILL DAMN 30% CHANCE THAT THEY MIGHT BETRAY YOU BUT NOOOOOOO YOU HAD TO LEAVE THEM BE GIVE HIM YOUR EXCLUSIVE LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE. AUTHOR:YOU SHOULD ATLEAST TRY TO LEVEL HIS CULTIVATION TO 2 LEVELS HIGHER BEFOR GIVING HIM DISCIPLES AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN HIM HIS LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE BECAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A KIND OF UNIQUENESS TO THEIR POWERS. THATS ALL THANK YOU.
An amusing and truely well written story set in a transmigrator/cultivation setting.The characters are somewhat unconventional (or refreshingly non-cliché), there is at least one absolutely adorable beast; world building and the character backgrounds are well paced, as well as intriguingly written, resulting in this novel being (at least in my personal opinion) an absolute gem to read and enjoy ?
I'm hooked it's interesting to me as I read it I'm very much captivated so much love I hope to see it evolve with enteristing lore, setting, and characters
The plotline of the story of interesting. There were a few errors that need tweaking. At first, I wasn't sure who the protagonist was, but as I went on I got a clear understanding. All in all, the external conflict of the story had me continuing to the next chapter. I'm sure when it's polished, it'll be an amazing novel. ?Keep up the good work, though