This is a scam. Going premium at 5 chapters and the content is just scam. To be honest, there are already signs showing that the mc is an absolute retard and brain dead. The free chapters already made me wanna drop this.
I'll give myself a 5 star because which author wouldn't. ¯_(ツ)_/¯ Anyway, I'll post one chapter every two days from now because I have an increased workload this month. Once I have more time, I'll write 1 chapter a day. I hope you enjoy my novel. Oh. One more thing. If any of you have any questions or complaints, post it in a review or comment and I'll see what I can do about it. I like writing so I'll do my best to entertain all my readers. Peace. -DarknessApproaches
The way the author forces in flash back in basically every chapter is seriously annoying. It just breaks the flow of the whole story and makes it all seem awkward just to dump in info, and sometimes the info is useless. I rather you make a few chapters at the start to do the info dumping, and provide the background of the world than forcing bits and peices of it everywhere. In general, the plot is progressing slowly, with some bs here and there but its ok if you want to pass time
Shameless author Review ???I will give it a five star, i have confidence in what i have written and i dare you to try it?
Well there nothing much to review here but u know i like mc but u can make it lighter if u not put the twise too much in the beginning, i think if u put there then itll be very long story but that good if u can make daily release... I'll gave u these score but they aren't final so keep improve i like ur story
Story is good but PLEASE no harem. I am starting to see harem built up. We need a MC who don’t need to take in females every time he meets them. We need balance with males. Also, please make the MC smarter. He seem to always help woman or he has no knowledge of how his power may bring benefits to his enemies or catch too much attention. Basically he has no control whatsoever on his power and doesn’t seem to think deeply on people he takes in. Almost like picking up trashes along the way and somehow they are women. No offense.
Good job author don't give up! Hardwork pays off just keep grinding at it and im sure ur efforts will be rewarded. Good story worth a read........
it was a good book... for the author's reasons, he dropped his own book. I don't want to read a 3,800-word chapter, just for the protagonist to walk 10 steps and put his hand on something... I lost the desire to continue reading, I don't recommend it.?
first the translation is bad but to MTL readers it's good second this novel is unique as it's a combination of off different types of novels 1 sect building novels in cultivation world2 clan/business novels in cultivation world i think this more of a try by the author of trying to combine two different types into one the problem with such 1st of it's kind novels is that the combination is not perfect as in such works a 20-30 chapters would focus on one side then the next on the other hence emulsion is not very great and sometimes breaks too
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This novel has to be redo im sorry it has been given very bad review such as a lot of grammatical reviews so i have to redo it sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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