I really like the MC of this series; he's actually level headed unlike other novels where the author describes the MC as a genius, level headed and such but they're just really lucky they didn't get murdered If you like a badass MC with supporting characters with actual substance then this series is for you
I've been enjoying this book, the worldbuilding is very good and I like the idea of a planet building itself in a way. This book is the authors first so the beginning of the book has some parts that get a little confusing but its not difficult to understand the gist of a what is going on. The biggest error this book has is the extensive character list and power system. Basically every race has different power systems, unique individuals in that race find new power systems, the mc introduces more power systems and creates unique races that have new power systems. It's too late to fix this issue now and its not actually horrible since I'm used to books that have 1 powe system that they never explain so you just kinda go with the flow and enjoy the ride and its fine.The characters however, I find myself confused on who is who, where they are, and what they are doing. A character list would be nice so we can understand all the nicknames and remember who we are talking about. An even better thing would be a basic map(although im not sure the feasibility) that every few chapters where you switch to see what a different race is up to, you give 1 map of where all the characters in the previous chapters since the last map have moved, then another map of where all the upcoming characters in the next set of chapters are before the chapter begins. Again idk how feasible that is, even if it was just art from the paint tool, but it would be super helpful to understanding the story.
Read a little bit. The first 2-3 chapters were interesting. Then everything went downhill from there.MC is supposed to be smart but tends to piss everyone off for no fucking reason just of a massive ego and child like attitude.And then the author piled up cliched situations upon cliched situations till I felt that even reading this was a chore.Won't recommend this web novel to anyone.It's really bad. I don't understand how people can stand to read this.
The storyline seemed promising at first glance, but it quickly devolved into a convoluted mess of clichés and predictable plot twists. The characters lacked depth and development, making it impossible
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"I planned to stay in the upper floors until you guys came along."
The man finally spoke, Hello Leonardo.
it's really good the characters the story just love it ?
Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more. The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses.The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers.The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system)The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either. Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving. ?
So it's this a villain Mc? Where's the tag?
What a piece of work???I love how the author came out with a great idea???This will surely be in my library to read. Highly recommended guys, you won't regret reading it❤️Kudos author more chapters to come???
I'm a sucker for action novel so you know I had to read this one.Excellent writing from the author and an interesting premise.English is very good and readable, far exceeds basic webnovel stories.A real page turner, highly recommend it!