I really love this story.... but truthfully, the sprinkle romance as you said it, is killing the story. I think her character is annoying and pushy. That why I gave character designs only 4. I actually ant to give only 3 but never mind. The stability of update is given only 4 becoz I want you to update more, haha. Overall it a good story and I like it very much. Thanks for your hard work author and keep up. I will be waiting for more update. Lol
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It's better than the fire novel, at least.
I like funny, overpowered stories.
There aren't really any inconsistencies, per se. The author just doesn't understand how literally anything works.
He says a company worth 150 billion is small, and just starting. I understand different currencies exist, but it's still a bit weird since a massive company is only worth 350 billion.
He forgets and changes usd to yuan later on for a bounty.
The MC has a great golden finger, but it's super shallow. I wrote a joke when it finally happened, but it seemed like anything said about the MC became true. But only if it was good. When he gets called fat, nothing happens.
Also, he magically has a perfect memory outside of the Golden finger. I'd be okay with that, except it literally is such an easy scene for him to get that from his golden finger, that it feels stupid. He's already basically a perfect guy even before the golden finger, according to the author. (Not the old reincarnation, the new one.) 95/100 looks, genius, great memory, good personality. Just needs to work out a bit.
The author doesn't understand hacking at all, so him writing about it is annoying. If rather it was a fantasy world so I didn't have to care.
Other characters didn't seem to have very unique personalities at all. I don't remember any great comedy, only cringe from cliche.
This premise makes for a good comedy or face slapping novel, at best. But that's really not what this is.
At least, the closest to that is when he claims to easily be able to cook a steak.
I don't think I even know anyone who can't cook a steak. Technology makes it easy.
Anyway, it's an okay book overall, but nothing special.
I am uncertain how to rate this novel.
On one hand it has quite a few interesting characters, a few interesting concepts and is written in a very entertaining way.
On the other hand there are quite a few logical errors, which are necessary for the plot, but could potentially lead to problems and inconsistencies later on.
20 Chapters are not enough to judge this book.
In general this is a novel in which the transmigrator has reach a very high level, but is totally unaware of this fact because he lacks the common sense and basic understanding of the Cultivation world.
The MC is so OP that his 3 common animal pets are already the strongest around, but they do not know it either because they have no inheritance or bloodline of any kind. It is basically a feed back loop of 4 fools, strengthening each others misconceptions.
All in all, a fun read with potential, but not enough to justify spending money so far.
Everyone is talking about IET new novel but believe me there is nothing new, yeah there is nothing new like human-demon war , dead mysterious mother, broken engagement, ultra MC and many more Cliche but the worst part is heroine who is depicted as a traditional (Pedantic) women . I mean she always cook for mc , wait for him and almost act like a servent while she had a higher status and potential only because a woman always had to be in her man's shadow , absolutely disgusting . Also there is time when she already made breakthrough but didn't tell mc because she didn't want embarass her man by attaining breakthrough before him(Yuck) and author tend exempt heroine from every event without any reason while she have same standing as mc in sect . So disgusting and backward thinking didn't expect something like this from the so called LEGENDRY IET .
a great story but very confusing had to drop since i found my self confused and questions unanswered, it would make for a very good story but i think it was poorly executed.
First let me say I love the story, if i only liked it id have dropped it. seriously needs an editor. lots of spacing errors that have the correct words but two words end up wrong as a result. Some incorrect words and some words that only make sense if using a thesaurus(those i actually dont mind bc it expands my vocabulary even if i have to look them up). I really like the mc and his OP “I cultivate everything” setup. Im interested to see where things go from here (im in the 60s chapter wise currently)
To the author let me say good story, keep writing and I’ll keep reading.
I love your writing, especially on the prologue, it captivated the readers to visualize it like a scene in a movie. And it goes to the next chapters as well. I can see, hear, and taste each scenes as you write it. You are very good at this one. Good job author!
To anyone else reading this,
You just need to read the first chapter, which only just takes about 2-5 minute of your time and then you can decide whatever you should contuine.
personally suggest you read at least chapter 1. I know i shouldnt judge a book base one chapter but first chapter hook me in. reading the book didnt get me bore and i know i wanst bore reading it because i summazie the chapter.
I suggest adding a picture so that people seeing it wont irgone it.
I really want to question people who gives this Novel so high
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