Just wondering why it took me so long to come across this book it really a rear gem.
The worst novel I ever read
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The usual facev- slapping chinese novel. So annoying.
Actually, I must agree with foxfire92 for recomending this story...
And dare I say this story is one of my fav that I just can't wait for another update and more chp to show...
This kind of Side Chara Mary-sueish-yet-not story is kinda got me. And that ZYY is almost like myself in my class except for some part...
we've been promised world background soon and the author has been able to develop amazing worlds so imma believe him. it's great. also there are many well written characters. only one is kinda iffy but the author has always been able to give characters definable characteristic so I'll believe the author will fix it.
idk but the story is too fast, the system is so confusing and not too detail about the skill. psychologically speaking I think you disregard the parent condition coz a three years old is missing, i know they know that their child is in his master but you destroy the relationship between parent and child psychologically speaking. the story is already a mess and the plot is straight forward without twist. at early story you made him almost godlike.
Meh, a wuxia novel. I'm not a fan though. Here's my like.
Well, IMO, if this novel is mixed with cultivation or system like, its better to read it. I've never read a poison plot hero but, with this synopsis. Its very good. I love poison expert like Tang San of DD and Leylin Farlier of WMW. Even though, poison is their side and not explored, I better hope that this novel will tell more about poisons.
Total and utter DISAPPOINTMENT!!!!!!!!!! That it was to dang fww in chapters!!!!! OMFG hurry and translate more hahahaha. Careful when reading this novel cause it will suck you in like a tornado in the middle of a trailer park hahaha. Great intro amd the flow of the story is also really great. Not much pointless filler. Its like a good movie keeps you dang occupied!!!!! Ended up reading thru the night jezzzz. Anyways super worth it must must read.
I so much love this book❤️
This story deserves 5 stars.
Writing is good, no bad grammars.
It is neat and cool story that deserves more outreach
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Out of 3 of the novels I have read from this author(Otherworldly Cultivator, Zhang Fei and Primordial Dual Cultivator Dragon), I consider this one the best. Second being Zhang Fei. I feel this novel has more refined elements (Here I mean it has been revised many times) than his other works. I feel this is a GREAT READ. To the Author: I really appreciate that you write 3 novels together with Daily Updates on them. Great Work.
Shameless plug from the author, this is a rework of a former novel I wrote. Readers who read the previous version will find many similarities with the rewrite. While there is a new MC, a much older one Henry Riddle the gnome, will make an appearance in later chapters. You can find this novel here and on Royal Road. I hope you enjoy this novel.