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So, for starters... Interesting.
The novel is actually incredibly well done. Although there are the usual misgendering and misspelling at times, the overall premise and story telling is actually quite good. (The 1 star comments are bots who trash every novel on the website- ignore them) So far (ch.20) the progression is quite well done. The only issue I have with it is the whole synopsis, (choice A or B or C, all of them) which hasn't really played out at all and considering the character's personality it's unlikely to happen. The world building is fairly well done though there isn't much of it. Then again this is SO FAR, I have no idea what's to come but my interest has been piqued with this one. (The people complaining about the character being dense and unaware of how strong he actually is, are idiots.. he had no actual skills to test his strength nor does he know anything about the world level, as far as he's concert his journey just began.)
it's only a 4.0 for now as it's still in trial and the way it goes from here will determine what I actually rate it. (Don't worry I never give 5.0 ratings)
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Clearly astonished by the world development, and man
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I came here to check why no chapter was posted for awhile to see this situation. It is unfortunate that this novel is being harassed by trolls or the woke crowd. Example someone saying how mc is simp cause he kills males but not females ect yet the novel shows his mindset on what he is thinking for his actions not to mention he has killed plenty indirectly of both male and female. Also he doesn’t kill the males at times also and even saves them for benefits. Mc personality is about growing stronger and doing things that will benefit him though we still see his internal struggles and how he is growing. TLDR Most if not all low reviews are just trolls or what people consider the woke crowd attacking the novel as you will notice the same thing being repeated on the low reviews like simp or mtl (if this is mtl then I wish all mtl was like this) Hope the author gets this resolved and comes back as it is a good novel.Ps I am obviously a bot account that has been undercover for years just for this moment is probably what the negative reviewers(The ones that are like the ones I describes above) would say.
Man this is isekai elden ring/dark souls. Love it. ? Action, system, adventure and without harem! The world building and writing make me genuinely shiver for their gargantuan scale and ambiance. The MC is not OP either! Hope the author gets enough revenue to do this full-time and update daily?
story progressing too fast on the "story" itself, so many points that could be explored are exchanged because of this MC's fickle personality, the author not helping at all... just adding more irrelevant factors
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[Final Score] ⭐⭐⭐⭐[Writing Quality] ⭐⭐⭐⭐Pretty good, a few typos here and there but they aren't common.[Stability of Updates] ⭐⭐⭐The author can miss a day or two but the usual upload schedule is once a day [Story Development] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐It's a pretty good novel I must say. The main character starts off as irritating and does dumb mistakes but he learns from them and doesn't repeat them. I really liked the idea of vampires who were at the top of the chain, feared by all turning into an oppressed race and slowly but surely starting to stand for themselves to overpower every opposer and stand proud as the strongest and feared race[Character Design] ⭐⭐⭐The character designs are not bad, they're what you expect of a vampire novel.[World Background] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Absolutely love the lore behind the world and I hope we'll get more info on different countries, kingdoms, religions, etc.
I know the author personally so I usually get to hear about these reviews on a less professional level. But even then I can harder tell the difference when reading a few of the spotlights that I’ve been able to read. He manages to continuously convey his true opinions about a story he has taken the time to truly critic without falling prey to others opinions. Another thing I’ll say from reading these is that he was able to peak my interest enough to make me want to read some of the Webtoons mentioned. An amazing series filled with puns that know no end and unique story lines that you should definitely check out.