I'm drowning in the amount of dialogues TT (I'm not used to it, sorry.)The chapters seem long too, which honestly, justifies the amount of uploads a month. So far, good potential for a comic maybe. would like to see how things develop ^^
This is definitely one of the best works by this author, along with the crafting system and not too MC like in killer of MC's, I LIKE IT, the work is also quite original, I don't know why it's not in the top
So I cannot review the translation quality of a story with no chapters but I managed to find the raw and read up to chapter 44. However, based on the fact that he's called "Smith" and not Chen Ling worries me that the translator is going to @#$% this story up like another recent story and try to make him American.
Based on the raws so far :
Story is pretty interesting and bland at the same time. The main character starts off pretty decently, but at a certain point the construction and general effort that goes into his business is left in the hands of others and he becomes a salted fish only responsible for the attributes.
That aside, the attribute business and how that all has been handled so far was very interesting to me. So despite the salted fish of a MC, I'm hoping to see this story released and translated properly.
Fair warning : There may end up being some nationalism/racism in this novel. The dude builds stuff that have attributes, this does not go unnoticed. Foreign countries do seem to be getting involved and the MC does start being overseen in a way by his own government. It's obvious the MC is going to support China. This may be why translators are switching nationalities of MCs when they translate recently, so it'll be Americans being racist and not Chinese.
Don't waste your time reading this..same plots like other eastern even worse ...#spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam
The mc's name starts with Lin, what else am I supposed to say??
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Very similar to The Legendary Mechanic. Same Virtual Reality concept with more or less similar protagonists. More Chinese humor that doesn't make sense. Pretty solid character development. Story has hinted towards progressing towards space.
Over one month without updates or an announcement.
Is the author still alive? We'll never know just as we'll never know the end of this novel.
The story is pretty decent maybe it'll get revived at some point.
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I like the game elements and two world meeting.
I think the higher existence is the bad guys
Is the female lead alive or will she be reborn like him
So, how shall I put this, the story seems a bit bland due to the writing style. The story in itself is promising with a hard working transmigrated MC, and the difficulty leveling and growing in a real world fantasy. The growth progress is steady, with steady plot. There is some stereotypes but such is life.
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Amazing amazingg I want more chapters cause there is a cliff hanger it wont be good to just hang the reader you knowww More chapter please author!