look i'm not going to lie, i haven't started reading this yet.
i've seen all the positive reviews and my expectations are above average.
However before i dive in i just want to get this off my chest... if there's even an inkling of the mc introducing guns i'm out... i'm so F***king tired of novels where the mc solves all confrontational problems with the all mighty gun deciding that it's a smart idea to bring one cluster-f**k of a developmental mistake (just look at America, Iraq and all that) into another world to mass produce. Frankly if i were brought to another world you can be damn well sure that i will be avoiding creating an Earth 2.0 (global warming, terrorism, human related extinction and all that s**t) there is so much we could take to another world that works out better for everyone but it falls back to the same old same old.
Anyway i apologise MR Author-san for using your novel as my rant page.
i guess you can take away from all this is that i have high hopes for what i'm about to start reading, don't let me down Author.
Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark..
I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense.
Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!
Not menu starcraft stories this one is very intriguing she play her cards well and the story it’s well narrated
A nice start would want the mc to be a king rather than make a democratic country
all i can say is awesome and good/incredible
This is firee ? Highly recommended, can't wait for the next chapter.
So many mistakes like calling The Root Anbu 'Foundation' nothing is really capitalized and makes it confusing. Random phrases are in Japanese which is just braindead. I didn't make it far nor do I want to.
Finished the whole novel.It was quite enjoyable until the last arc with Western Region.Very rushed. The ending was anti-climatic. The revelations were whatever, no shock. Did the author get bored and just wanted to finish it asap? A shame, in the earlier chapters he wanted to write something of quality.And it's a shame they haven't crossed the world with other mortal or immortal worlds. Due to the last ~20 chapters I can only lower the rating.If you're looking for a similiar novel, check out Invincible Uncle-Grandmaster. This one has better ending.
interesting..............................
Conversation is likeMc: are you a two dimensional personFm: yesMc: oh goodFm: you?Mc: yes me tooFm: goodMc: yes very good Mhjkliytezfhkkrefhiiregjiyrgjutfhjktgvjkytvkkyfcjkyghjkyrdcjlmmueaadvbkmly
This is an amazing piece of art.First of all, the author kept the entry to the different world short and easy. The story began in no times.secondly, we have to mention the world detail. It was so vivid that I was actually walking through the image of the NEW World in my mind.The story is getting really good too. It did not seem boring. I am hoping the author will finish the story.Author! Keep up this amazing work.
This is a really good sports novel. The pacing is spot on as the first few season is character development.