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I read first chapter just to look how it is, but suddenly I got hooked in and was kept reading and reading. This has great potential and will do good if given some exposure. Keep it up!
Actually guys this is my book, I may not be perfect at the first chapters but it's worth interesting as you go down the lane. I'd be happy to see what y'all think about it. I love y'all readers. Happy reading.
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I’m not going to try to nitpick the book, because overall it’s a decent book. However, the grammar takes me out of it. I can’t help but notice it, and if it were once or twice it would not be a big deal. But it’s almost every paragraph and for a book that is trying to go premium? Not a great showing. That being said, the overall writing style is decent and not a ton of info dumps which is good. But honestly? Not very original, it legit is I reincarnated as a slime.
overall i cant really say much since this book barely have less than 10 chapters. But the style of how the author explaining the situation is great.
I agree with what some of the other readers have said. Starting out, there is a little problem with the development of the harem members. Some of that gets resolved in later chapters. One thing it didn't like was that just like someone else said, it seems like the author wants to make it so one person from every world is "in love" with the mc. I'm all for the harem thing, but even so, that would be in my opinion too much.
(spoiler alert: this is not quite a review)..... grammar aside,the story has been good so far.though. is this inspired by "How I became a Star" or something like that by kevinmbeautcha?or spirit immortal?i consider good stories to be bad stories of they spend more time stressing the readers and making them sad.what's the point of distracting myself from life if the story just makes me feel sad or disappointed?
Author of this novel . Unlike others I won't pretend that my work is a 5/5 , but I think the good point of this novel will be the world background as I will take multiple old myths and reincorporate them inside the game to make the story really interesting ( Like Fate for those who knows ) .The bad point of this novel is obviously the writing quality , although I'm not terrible , it's obvious that this novel is far from perfect in this category .