Hey, ever wonder what its like to see the MC be a fatty despairing for a girlfriend? Well you’ve come to the right book.
This fatty realized his desires upon death and was gifted with a chance to go after them.
No more shy guy, as this fatty uses the system given to work towards such a goal.
From fat to flat, from starving artist to leonardo de vinci.
Come watch this journey with an old man, for with the tasks this system gives will have you both rolling and thankful you are not him.
Kudos on the translation to get across the great humor, and maintaining stable updates.
The pace of the story isn’t the fastest, nor exactly slow either. Its just right to flesh out the accompanying characters alongside the MC.
Perhaps the only tank in ratings would be world building as things are very centralized at this point in the story.
Definitely a more modern setting comedy story based around slice of life, so no harsh critique from the world building perspective here.
Found the story very bland for my liking, nothing really stood out or was interesting. Things just happened. I found the summary at the front to be really useless compared to the actually story cause the story is just very meh
Nice...finally found a story that could potentially be one of the greats on this app. I was reading chapters here or there and boring!!!!
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Honestly your Fanfic is simply amazing, from start to end it was just incredible I particularly liked the chosen gender, just saying, the mc is not op but she's strong and I believe she can grow much stronger.
And just one more thing, having 3 people together is not a harem so... You get me.
Omg! The plotline for this is something I would usually go for, and everything is quite intriguing. The story is very much easy to read, and there are not much grammatical errors.
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Shameless review that I had to give. The book has a nice beginning but sometime later, it feels slightly boring. However this changes later on. If you're a fan of light comedy, games, action and possible harem occurrences(which may or may not be) then I strongly recommend this. Will try to keep a steady update since as you might know, this is an original. Be expecting a slightly OP MC, smart but dumb comrade, rivals, childhood romance and a lot more action and fun.
A solid start to a book. Worth a look into, if nothing else. It does follow the usual trope of "weakling gets strong, acts dumb to well known tropes, we all cringe," sometimes. But it still is enjoyable to read.
Really good world and character background it was in every detail which also helps us to get familiar with the MC.I don't mind adding this my library and do a binge-reading.
Very nice story but author needs to work on his update stability ????????????????????????????????????✌?✊✋✋✋✋✋✋✋✋✋
A book written during a period where things are dark and the world needs something full of light, races is surely the best. keep up the good work.