its liked reading teletubies in a novel. what i mean is, the novel wrote just base on around 2 metter radius bubble of the mc. What worse is that the story jump all over the places. The story doesnt has any goal whatsover, there no solid foundation in world building, the character are all there just create platform for the mc to perform,but then again our mc just THERE, he just doesnt has any reason to exist in that story really....its bassicaly slice of life but with power building story just so that he doesnt get killed. The story is really blurry, only the mc is slightly not,then again the mc still vague because the story is just all over the place. Ch 1 he brave the danger and survive, 5 chapter then the mc suddenly becoming a super inteligent and bravest knight there is. What he got after 3 years skip of training doesnt even got any explaination....is he sword user? is he magic user? how good he is with close combat? how good is he with intelectual thinking? the story just progress as if telling you, "Yo mate, this is the mc, he's talented and he is THE MC, after hes training for 3 year any problem that come hes way is solveble and he is THE MC, oh yeah and the scene where he is fighting, the close call scene, the intelectual connan scene, and the scheming unveil scene is just to make it more dramatic, he is THE MC so of course you dont need to know how good he is compare to other, he just there and any problem solve."
Ntr ntr..well the author warned it..but mc is garbage and doesnt care if gets ntrStory was going good for few chap but immediately declined after ntr..its not like i hate mc being ntr'ed but the mc himself is scum and everything incl plot declined after he gets ntr'ed
I love the novel so far and bear cub is so cute!!!! ?
Okay, the main character is something different. I appreciate that.That said, I literally wrote something like this as a bad joke once; the punchline being that there was never a paragraph without a level up, and the things leveling getting increasingly silly. And here, it seems to be played totally straight, and not that... weird. It just happens, and that's all. It's not bad, just bland. I'll read more, and adjust this if it changes later on, but still, it's kinda hard to get through sometimes.
Earlier in the novel the character was only around the boy and story was unclear how ever if a person reads from the very 1st chapter to 39th I guess , huge development in both the writer grammar , delivery, story and the novel , if it goes as it is now , pls help it , if helped it can be a great great great manga
Hey everyone it's your shameless author here! For return readers, yes I know I have a million books running, but I'm planning on focusing on this novel for at least a few months. I'm aiming for one or two chapters a day, every day. Wish me luck and love you guys!
Nice start actually. I got hooked up pretty easily. Though you need to improve your writing to make other readers attached to the story. Keep up the good work!
I don’t know why would the author want the MC to be this dumb? It starts very nice even though he is not a genius at least he still have brains in the early chapter. The current chapters just make him a dumb MC. Trying to antogonize a family that is considered the strongest in the area? Refuse the help of ming yu just because of a hunch? Seriously!! If he is not the mc of the story he should ne dead by now. Remember how the bai family was explained they are the strongest and can so anything they like. Just the mere fact of what he did to the young miss of bai family they can kill him without question. He’s only protection is that he is the MC.... its better if he has a plot armor which we can say the reason he survive till now. No plot armor and still survive we can only link that becuase he is the MC which is unjustifiable for the story.... sorry I just got frustated because i really like the start of the LN. I hate how the plot became pretty weak and ****** the MC this dumb.
Not a great read tbh, there are many things wrong with this fic. First of all the power scaling is fcked, he absorbs part of a celestial and the time stone in the first chapter and you have him being just a bit stronger than the Ancient one. It's like the author has no idea of the power scaling of marvel. Another thing is the mc doesn't show any character growth. He went from being a human to slime then killing loads of corrupt sht for two years and still acts like a child. The mc suddenly has all the random ass ability that comes from nowhere. Like I don't rly mind it but like where are these abilities coming from? Also, the mc isn't allowed to change the timeline of the story or he will be smited. Like wtf is the point of the story if he doesn't change anything? The mc having an alter ego of a woman and that woman being portrayed as his big sister? I just find this so weird and pointless. I hate the fact he is a coward and tries to hide behind this woman. Also surely doing this would affect him? But once again he shows no difference in personality. Lastly, as I don't want to go on even more xD You have the mc born into the mcu and you make him be with an oc.... like out of all the woman in the mcu an oc is what you chose? Seriously? Also, meets her and then the next chapter they are already together like wtf????Gl to the author
very nice...actually decent....................
Everything is "The Strongest [Fill in the blank]" These days.If everyone is following the trend I'm expecting "The Strongest Left Ball-Sac" Soon.
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