"System show my current status"
「The soldier guarding the fountain park is my older brother. 」
it's really good. the author is making the Mc story more detailed so we don't just get oh hey look I'm born undead let's kill them all. I like it. so around after 50 chapters you'll to it. there are some grammar mistakes like him her he she but it's easily fixable and not as exaggerated as people are saying on here. instead of what they are saying "which
我已經被你的創作深深吸引了。從第一刻起，我就沉浸在這個故事中，感覺自己被帶到了一個新的、迷人的世界。您作為作家的才華在每一頁上都顯而易見。你描述場景、人物和情感的方式簡直是大師級的。我喜歡你發展情節的方式。它是原創的，充滿懸念，讓我著迷直到最後。毫無疑問，這部作品將永遠銘刻在我的記憶中。我再次祝賀你們取得這項偉大成就。我相信這本書會取得巨大成功，並且會吸引許多像我一樣的讀者，他們會對你的才華感到高興。
nice book overall writing style is perfect!if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return.'
A historia e interesante eo desenvolvimento de muitos personagens e eveluçao lenta de personagens e uma trama misteriosa q voçe precisa ler varia vezes pra etender e 1 personagem principal banstante devertido
Thy, Primordial Saint Lord has reached here but I need to continue my path of Dao! Meet you again junior!
Wow, captivating, transports you to another world while still being relatable. Cannot stop reading???
I am going to be honest. The plot is both unique and enjoyable. So is how the characters are introduced. The world building is also acceptable; it is generic medieval fantasy. But the writing is truly shit. I know you are contracted and want the money, so you do not have time or intention of going back and editing the earlier parts, but just as paying workers properly and providing them with rest increased production and efficiency in your story, editing those earlier parts will multiply your revenue.
This is the first review that I warier on this app. I have to say I am very impressed. The quality of the story is better good. It is light and funny but very addictive. I feel I am already getting withdrawal symptoms as I just finish all the chapters. Keep doing good job with this fresh new take on cultivation and dungeons.
Awesome bro. This story match someone's real life incidents. ??????. Keep going bro. One day you will be a professional writer ? ? ?I hope you will
Muy buena!!! Es una lastima que tarde tanto en sacar un capitulo. Vamos que se puede!!!! Vamos que se puede!!! Vamos que se puede!!!!!!!! Vamos que se puede!!!!!