Demiurge_Ohara
I love Sci-fi stories. It is still startlet, but still good. It isn't a complex story in which I have to remember things. The story is easy to follow. Love the story so far. keep it up
Okay I have read a lot of book and after a while you can just tell how much potential a book has. Its not always accurate but pretty close. Now this book right here has one of the greatest level of potential I have seen and the Author is really harnessing that potential to a greater degree. I hope he keeps it up.Author on a personal note I love your work keep it up ?
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Fantasy vibes are creeping me in due to this novel! The title really speaks for itself though, not kidding! Let's be honest here for some reason, this book is really great!??
Rough start for the main character, but he finds ways to adapt. Curious approach to learning for the MC. Still trying to decide how much more of the book that I will read, but think it is worth reading a few chapters to see if the webnovel catches your interest.
So far it looks absolutely amazing! From the three chapters that I've read so far, it sounds like it'll be really fun. The fact that the MC is such a fanboy is great, and portrayed in a way that I haven't seen before, which makes it pretty interesting and original. I can't wait to see how it goes!
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If excessively arrogant characters who pick fights with little kids is not annoying then this won't bother you... but this is enough to lower my rating (minus 2 stars) Otherwise there is nothing amazing or terrible just another generic xianxia... I had hoped the mc would elevate the novel... I'm still waiting (hopefully things will change) Besides my pet peeve the novel is good... give it a try
I’m not good at leaving a good review in order to help the Arthur by giving suggestions, so I’m just gonna leave this smiley face :)
Even though it is just a short novel for now, I think it looks pretty promising. The setting is nothing new, but the mc so far is very likeable. It is also clear to me that some parts of the games plot are being intentionally concieled, so it makes a bigger impact in the future. That or it is really just a very popular game with a sucky plot. Anyway, to be honest, so far this deserves the five stars. We have to see if you can keep the quality going, and maybe make the chapters a little lenghtier.
AWSOME BOOK TRYING TO GET RATINGS UP SO THEY DONT DROP BOOK.............................m............M.........................
Peak Evil MC novel, in the same level as Reverend Insanity. MC knows when to rely on tactics and brute force..................................................
