The book is nice but the write needs to improve.
This novel story is very similar to beginning after the end
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Do you like an mc that get's slapped around and pis*ed on? Well, if so then this is the novel you have been looking for.
Do you like an mc that get's slapped around and pis*ed on? Well, if so then this is the novel you have been looking for.
This is a story I HAD to review. It was like part of me (a very big part) decided it was happening and when the lazy me started considering just putting it off until I eventually forgetting to write one (happens a lot) the first part pulled a figurative gun out and held the lazy part of my at figurative gunpoint to actually write a proper review.
So let me first mention how I binge read this novel hard. I literally put all other novels on hold for 2 days and even had to force myself just go get my daily free SS from webnovel check in etc.
The author does an amazing job describing scenes and stories. This honestly felt like I was drawn into on of my favourite tv shows or anime with how I just imagined everything in my head more than I felt I was actually reading, everything flows so well together it's as smooth as a dream would be.
The storyline is so well thought out, the world building is thorough but not too much and the author doesn't dump info on you, it's like every couple chapters there's a line or a few where it feels like setting the scene for just that part of the story but each time it's like a puzzle piece building up the world gradually until you suddenly realise how much worldbuilding has been going on without you thinking about it. It sounds like there's a lot of world guiding going on but actually there's not much. Enough to tell you what you need and want to know, nothing more or less. Exactly what you need without giving you too much to think about or not enough to understand the world.
Character development is so incredibly realistic and full of just pure raw emotions and some illogical moments that just make sense when thinking from the heart while others fit perfectly when thinking logically. The author just knows exactly how to mix the two perfectly and blend them together. At time focusing on one, then the other and sometimes switching between them quickly in relatable and amazingly way where it just flows and fits and makes so much sense for it to do so while drawing you into the story and the feelings and perspectives of the characters.
I have almost 0 issues with the writing quality. I think maybe a rare mistake here or there but I was too drawn into the story and focused my mind just corrected anything wrong subconsciously so I could keep reading without pause just to keep enjoying the amazing read that this novel provides.
When it comes so some worries some people (probably heterosexual guys like me) about possible male on male action then I can say as long as you aren't homophobic then you have nothing to worry about. It's not off putting in the least and worse case the author puts ample warning that allows you to skip anything you might be sensitive on.
A couple things to say to the author! Firstly the parts of some "Creators thoughts" at the end of a few chapters where you apologised for possible filler. I CAN'T SEE ANY FILLER! To me a filler is anything that does not progress the story and just increases word count. This novel however is done so beautifully where everything has a purpose. Either giving information or an opinion/perspective a character that heels progress the plot or explains emotions and why characters act the way they do, it's done perfectly and to even consider these chapters being given that label of "Filler" is not giving the novel (and especially the author) nearly enough credit.
Something an author once told me when I asked for writing tips was to reduce wasted words. If it doesn't need to be there and doesn't progress the story then delete it. I have yet to find a single wasted word in this novel and I doubt I ever will see a wasted word from this author as long as they continue to have the same passion for writing as they have now.
Lastly I would like to say that this has got be one of my favourite novels yet and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if you aren't sure I ask you just sit down and read this novel for an hour. You won't regret it.
Well at the beginning, it is just what you would expect from the cover... honestly I did not even think that this novel will cross 30 chapters..
Ah I am so glad that I was mistaken...
Well the r-18 part still remains, but the story has a very nicely unfolding plot. Even if some characters (especially those at the beginning of the book) do not have any dimension other than having sex, that surely has changed quite a lot... at least the author puts in more effort to flesh out the girls (especially from the book) than before.
To anyone starting new: Bear with it... this novel will slowly turn better. Trust me when I say that there was a time when I would just let it lie in the library and read it only when I wanted to fap to a novel... well, today I have paused reading a few other novels in order to use my free pass here...
Well i am writing this review purely due to my love for league. I have read other similar novel and haven't been satisfied due to my familiarity to game and the professional league ... I hope this novel will be better than the predecessor novel and finally i can boost up ma rank to diamond (untill now plat is my threshhold
Hey, the author is here to shamelessly rate my own novel!
But on a serious note, this novel has been flowing in my brain for quite a long time and finally i get the change to share it with you guys.
It's similar to The World Online, as i said in my author's notes however this won't be a copy & paste type of story.
Enjoy it, it is not for those who wish to read a 'grand novel' with 'exceptional world building', it's just a story to read when you are bored and stuff.
It was so good for the first 10-20 chapters then you begin to realize the MC is a complete spineless coward that sits around lazing around talking about how he wants some good life with no worries
but it doesn't happen because he continues the running into dangerous situation for every little f****** thing but he's too f****** lazy and stupid to buy anything to make him more powerful so he doesn't have to worry about getting his ass kicked by something as pitiful as a troll
And then you go to the twilight world radio acts like a f****** guy version of Bella swan being afraid of every little f****** thing
oh and don't get me started on the harem it was pretty good in the earlier chapters because you can still hear the names but now there's so many in his harem that is still devolved to him just saying "I'm going out on a date with the girls" instead of individually saying their names because there's like 20 girls already in his harem and he's only been to like five worlds
Not to mention the cultivation world's when it's just the author talking down to his readers constantly
its good to read, i love the phasing of each event, the character of the story is really exciting, i want to read more, i wish more chapter please
Love love love this book! Love how the story is developing slowly and you never know what's gonna happen next. Excited to see what happens next to mc and his wife and all of their friends!!! Nice job author