Read to chapter 112. I came to it hoping for a slightly worse legendary mechanic. I felt disappointed. The writing is good, no errors or anything, and I think the story has some interesting things to it, but I can't stand the MC. In particular, his indecisiveness on hiding or showing his power. It also feels like the MC is wasting a lot of his time and throwing away his advantage. He also doesn't seem to use his knowledge from his previous life a lot.
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I have read though 1500 ch , it is full of racist ideology , how Chinese are best in every thing , how great their govt and military is , how everyone else are trash and evil and how they bully Chinese , racist words for Americans and Indians how they are incompetent and feed of Chinese , this is a novel with Interstellar theme so why their is so much racisim and importance to race .
This is my personal opinion so don't take offense in any way.The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.The world background seems to be normal world around 2013.It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.
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Am I the only one spooked by the synopsis? I haven't read it yet but I'm seriously spooked right now. The author has no control over the characters and plot development? The heck? He is just a spectator?! So like everything is real. I don't know why am trembling right now. Am I scared or am I excited? I don't know. There's only one way to find out... let's read this! I hope I don't regret this
Really good novel, mc is a bit toxic to say the least, only reason im rating because some idiots are giving it one star just because its a check in novel without reading, you know who you.
i've read lady wickshire before and i absolutly loved it ♥️♥️♥️
read till lady wicky about to enter the wprld tree.. i really really really want to read what happen next
this is better than blood warlock pls continue writing it
This book is Very Creative, I have read a lot of Video gamebooks but I find this one a little more interesting. Turing the Afterlife into a game is Unique in itself. The book is well written and has a few unexcepted surprises. What I am most excited about is upcoming enemies
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Noooooo where's the rest of it? Don't tell me you'll drop such a good book, it has so much promise as a 'cultured' novel.
Really enjoyed the story albeit short.