supporting the author with the ratings as the synopsis showcases everything I like in a mc. Hope the author writes this story to the end. This could very well be a hidden gem as the story progresses into 200+ chapters so stay strong and faithful author ?
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I really like the world and setting you've written, as well as the realistic interactions. My only gripe is having so many characters introduced that it's sort of hard to keep track of all. If you're still planning 50 different characters I hope you can cut it down and make each character more memorable this way.
Other than that it's great with pacing and worldbuilding
This story is definitely a wonderful read. The author delivers his promise on a villain protag. The translation is also well done. I have only noticed few errors, average 1 every 2 chapters or so. Well done translator.
I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem.
The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.
The choices the system gives aren't bad, it's the MC that makes terrible choices. He makes choices that always lead fights, face slapping and just really annoying.
There is simpler way do it
This novel is ' Solid ' novel that has proper background and world building.
I pray the respect the author for putting the detail. It's just very easy to image every action did by MC or characters.
The novel is definitely weird because the author is using ' He ' even though MC is already ' SHE ' but I will leave it author's hands. Expect that part every paragraph is excellent with the clean writing style and notable pace. I feel like reading ' Normal ' novel where most of the Cultivation novels already lost that aspects.
Characters are interesting especially dialogues that are not hogwash. It is just a solid Five Stars novel from the impression of Earlier Chapters
What a cheap copy of THE AUTHOR'S POV. Though not exactly the same but almost the same. There is no flow in the story, the writing is messed up, although I liked reading it, something about this story doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars or 4 stars.
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more update！ plz！
I want a faster update.
MC is way too dumb and too emotional I can't read this book. How can you make him have a personality so unbalanced like pick one and stick to it.
It starts out quite well and the type has a lot possibilities.But then you get some bad one dimensional characters quite fast: oh you offended me or I don't belive you, I will just attack you. Also the world development iis very limited and seriously one-sided. Everything must only be for the best of humanity, without any realistic considerations of how people actually act.
Nickaido's here, with a brand new novel, and naturally, I'm going to shamelessly put five stars. Hope in and I'm sure you'll enjoy the ride. Love you all.