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starts of good, then after about 80 chapters author forces drama and tries to make mc look resolute and cool....
sadly it comes over as incredibly childish and bratty, really out of character and annoying, all at the same time.
killed the story for me.
It's a great novel depending on your taste. I like It very much, and think It's a really good read. I'm still at chapter 26 but I'll see If it stays good.
Is this not harem, unlike S class adventurer? B—————————————————————————————————————————————————>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you are looking for a kingdom building novel that is realistic and similar to "release that witch", then go somewhere else but if your looking for a novel where every reader wants the MC to FVCKNG FAIL SO BAD because of his unreasonable, and stupid decision but still succeeded due to his Plot armor that's thicker than KING KONGS ANUS, then this is the novel for you....
Seriously, mc is sometimes a genius or stupid, kind or unreasonably ruthless, sometimes alpha or beta in females...
Makes you wonder if his bipolar or something.....
Recommended, the story wasn't as cliche as I thought it would be. The writing style was simple to read and understand. The characters felt real, not over the top. The skill seems OP but let's see. It must have a weakness right?!
Author I am loving the story and Hope to read it more in the future[img=recommend][img=update].
Though I want to ask is there a Discord server. For Character illustration(if there is any)
And,
Is there a chapter where it mentions cultivation Realms and the like.
As I am at the end of Vol 1, I want to if there is anything like that for future reference while reading,
as there is a chance that I might forget some So it would be helpful if there was a separate chapter describing Cultivation Realms.
The story has some great potential to actually work, not gonna lie. The MC is understandable and is fleshed out and not rushed in any way.
*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism:
There are a few mistakes (punctuation and capitalization) that need corrected. Also, I wish we saw a bit more of his wife (mabey in later chaps?)
Positive Notes:
I really liked the character and story buildup. Also, the way you did the whole reincarnation tech, just amazing. Thank you for the great story.
Personal Preference:
I h8 that I needed to limit myself to five chapters for now, too many books to go through to read any more. Will definitely come back to this one later, be expecting my return and please keep writing until completion.;,;. (If you don't, you will have many upset fans.;,;.)
I would be lying if I said I don’ t enjoy reading this, I love the author’s style of writing
I liked the first rendition better, but it was a little bit fast-paced. Although it's still the same, jack is still in space, silver is still a goated fighter. I feel like there isn't much publicity to this work yet but as it grows in chapters and its storyline people would come to love it.
If anyone has complaints about this work, they can square up. I'll fight you anytime.
ps: I'll make a better review later on.
it is looking like it will be a great book