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Within the first page there were multiple grammar mistakes ,so that is where I stopped reading!! Hey your **** together or quit trying to publish online books.
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Your synopsis grips me first, then the prologue which really explains everything to come in the book. Though sci-fi is not my cup of tea but when I see a good story I won't hesitate to dive in. Well done on your plot development, the well-detailed description of your characters and scenes, it really progresses the plots. Also, your grammar is good and the plot moves at a steady pace.
i see wall of text, hard to read, hard to visualize, hard to imagine, hurts my eyes and imagination, I don't know why people recommend this.
Engaging, intruiging, different, amazing. Diversity of characters, the misty mysterious plot that makes you clinch for the next chapter, and already showing character development are just a few of many things to be said about this one. Can't wait for the rest.
Pritty nice story so far and good gramer
Love the story plot... read a lot of book so far some with same story plot but this one is more interesting ove each characters they are interesting the only frustrating part is waiting for the release of new chapters...???