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Never experienced this kind of reality fiction in Indian stories the author really showed his true vision to audience ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️, ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Well, I am speechless. I must say I am impressed with the author's work. Even for the self-same country that we lived in. And so, I can say that the author is not an ordinary one or a newbie. This is the kind of novel that I would like to binge read. All in all, kudos for a job well done. More chapters await me....... [img=recommend]
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easy to digest, need a little bit of visual (but that's just for me), overall a must read for you who like old school sci-fi, I just need moreee!!!
The premise of the story is somewhat decent, but the actual execution is terrible and makes no sense (There will be spoilers below from the first 20-25 trial read chapters).The people in this world are absurdly stupid. For example, at some point (~chapter 20) the MC goes to a fish racing competition where people gamble. He meets the director of the opposing hospital across the road from his at that competition. He doesn't recognize the director of the "massive 10-story, famous" hospital across the road which happens to be his "sworn enemy," but that director immediately recognizes the MC, the owner of some small dinky 2-story hospital which barely gets any customers. Go figure.And it doesn't even end there. The MC's cat touches a fish, and the referee of the contest comes over and says that the MC needs to buy it. He initially seems normal, but after getting a phone call, he says that the MC needs to buy the fish for 300k (yes that is a ridiculous price, everyone else around and even the MC realize that it is unusually high). The referee even says that he isn't allowed to leave and must buy the fish since his cat touching it counts as the cat selecting it. The MC, being the absolute braindead pushover he is, decides to buy the fish. He doesn't at all find it suspicious, even though he knows that "every pet hospital other than his own (which all also happen to be "unethical" is out for his blood for some reason. He isn't secretly biding his time to get revenge or scam the guy who tried to scam him or anything, he just buys it with no plans or anything. It is then revealed that the head of the opposing hospital bribed the referee to make the MC pay a ridiculous amount for the fish (Wow, Shocker).Some more dumb brainless face-slapping chapters later, the MC wins after his fish turns into a true dragon. The director guy then decides to try and scare off the MC from claiming his prize money with some thug, and when that fails he follows the MC around for a bit to try and kill the MC. And his reasoning for killing the MC is the 8 million yuan that the MC won in the race for getting first. (For reference, 8 million yuan is chump change to people with positions in that world). Not because he has a way to communicate with the one and only True Dragon in that entire city, which is literally a priceless pet. For 8 million yuan. Like if you are gonna have cardboard brainless copy-paste villains, at least try and make the blind greed somewhat reasonable author.There are a ton of similar events/logic to this but I am way too lazy to describe them all.
It a fine book not bad not great either. Though later in the book, there’s flash backs and time skips which for some reason aren’t specified when they happen. So it sometimes feels jarring when the Main character is at a place and the next second immediately some where else with no explanation of how they got there.
ProsWorld building Loving familyVr game mechanicsConsMC character is not consistent. He is supposedly a genius but I haven’t seen any such thing from him. Being a genius, he is also oblivious to females around himI don’t mind stories with or without harem. But this one is obviously going for the non harem route with Luna as the fmc but leading lot of girls to the MC. Amanda is not properly resolved
Hello! It's your friendly neighborhood author GrandSky with a bit of a...uh... shameless promotion. Don't take it to heart. Go read the novel and tell me what you think. Well, let's start with the story. Not gonna make it a spoiler though. It's going to a bit slowpaced, but it gets better. Blah, blah blah. I dunno how to do this. Please just check it out! And come leave a review. Constructive, not harsh.From Grandsky
This novel i read from the start and i quite like it one of the best part is twist that in chapter 20 i like it ,i very exited about the next chapter
An elaborate story set in two conjoined worlds, virtual and reality come together to form the backdrop for one of the best VR-novel stories on this Website. The usual overdone Reincarnation genre gets to relive its glory years through this story. All described and outfitted by tasteful grammar and a superb writing style.
Now onto the meat of the review.
For the last week I had been searching for a new VR-novel, since most of the ones I'm enthralled with and am waiting on updates for have been on hiatus or are currently way too slow with their updates. There's a long list of novels in this exact genre I've read but the ones that match up to this one aren't many. Notable ones are:
-Phoenix Phire (Small hiatus should continue in a few weeks)
-Rise of the Undead Legion (Very slow with updating)
-Realm of Myths and Legends (Currently on hiatus)
If you've read any of the above then this one is a must have on your reading list. Vice versa aswell.
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There's a lot to say for this novel and I'll try to keep it somewhat short, atleast for my standards.
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The world is as I mentioned before very elaborate more so because both 'worlds'(VR and Reality) get explored and explained, however there's no long info dumps to be found. Everything has it's time and place beyond the initial introduction which feels easy to grasp whilst reading. Never at one point did I get annoyed by exposition. Both worlds feel as if they are filled with life and adventures/interesting things.
One thing I like about VR-novels among other things are the Game-Elements and they are described beautifully here, with the proper appearance. Author seemingly puts a lot of effort into making sure the numbers add up and can always be found in the chapter comments if anything is incorrect or mixed up.
Overall I really like the world-building of this Novel and it feels alive. There's a few Side-Stories added in showing other people's perspectives which help in that regard.
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Characters come alive and feel genuine. Their feelings can be experienced and are played with by the Author in a realistic way.
The main character has multiple personalities which after reincarnating and progressing through the story alter and change in regards to what happens in a realistic way. I usually don't really like characters which are at the utmost top of the Dao of shamelessness as many readers have called it but I find it passable, plus he doesn't use it a lot.
I feel like the interactions between Qion Qi(Think I'm writing this wrong ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ) are somewhat 'too' silly sometimes. There's only so many fart jokes which I can personally enjoy before that gets old, sometimes I wish he could just be the bad ass lion sidekick I imagine him to be instead of the comedic relief of the story. Even without him farting and such there's enough humor in the Novel to get around.
Author in the beginning got a lot of shit for the Female main character which I don't think he deserves. Admittedly I've come in after all the changes were made so I don't know exactly how the story was before but as it stands now I've never hated or disliked her. I actually like her drive and motivation, backstory and how she treats the people around her. I think she's well written.
MC's guild is filled with fleshed out and loveable characters which I like reading Side-Stories about, aswell as interactions between them and the MC.
His various love interests are the same, filled with different realistic emotions which keep them feeling alive.
They add a lot to the story and I like that there's a few chapters worth of stories inbetween Arcs filled with conversations and interaction between them all.
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Writing is superb and is easy to understand and get through, the reading experience is delightful. The editor(Devil's Advocate) does his job great aswell.
Anyways I need to cut it off here, can only have so much in a review, one day I'll get better at that.
Thanks for writing Author (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
Hope everyone stays safe during this period of cornovirus and be cheerful. Also enjoy the ad-free story.
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