Status: C23
The first few chapters are a bit confusing but it goes well from ch5.
The world bg is a bit confusing too. Giving too much info at a time is not so good cuz we tend to forget them later on if those aren't mentioned.
And author pls don't add time skips and flashbacks for a short time period or when a situation is not complete. No one likes to get interrupted in the flow. ofc time-skips, flashbacks and different situations for a broad view is good. but too many of em causes tack of intrest.
Review may change with upcoming chps ofc.
The world-building is amazing, with promising characters and the concept is fantastic. The writing is a bit off, but everything seems good, the sci-fi concepts are good.
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love reading all of the pancakes novels and this one is just as good as all the others.......................................................
This is my first time the shop owner almost kill inside his shop, funny right, all i mean novel with a system and selling something inside his shop his almost invisible inside, hahha even though is almost copy with the selling pokemon around the world,, my point here is the host/mc is too weak and the system is weak though, can't even protect mc,
looks good!!..............................................................................................................................................
I have read up to chapter 8 and I believe it's enough for me to review the novel.Writing Quality: Excellent. The author doesn't use too complicated words but uses words to create sentences that describe the scenes in detail yet not structuring it in a complex way. Easy to read and sentences doesn't break off immersion.Story Development: The Protagonist is a goblin with a VR helmet. So far the pacing is moderately done and the MC started off as a weak goblin which leads to more progress in the later chapters. I can assume that the story will last long for the MC didn't become overpowered at the start.Character Design: The author didn't write the characters as one dimensional cardboards who only speak what is written on the script. You can feel the emotions of the characters such as their frustration and fear depending on what scene was being portrayed. The dynamic between Lucas and Rei is quite intriguing to read.Updating Stability: The author is a monster when it comes to writing words per day. He can write 20k words if he doesn't have any busy works in his schedule. So not only can author maintain stable updates, he even has countless chapter stockpiles that might be released if he holds a mass release event. In other words, updates aren't a problem since author can update daily.World Background: It is set in a fantasy world filled with magical creatures and different races and species. The fantasy element introduced in the world will not let you get bored if you like reading novels with fantasy genre. But since I have only read the early chapters, the author didn't info dump about the world background so I'm slightly clueless of the in-depth world background of this novel. Nevertheless, the world background shouldn't be boring since the author already have written several novels before to know what to write and what not to write.Overall: I can only say as expected of the author. He never fails to write an entertaining novel depending on the reader's taste in novel genre. So for those who aren't certain whether to read this or not, at least read 5-10 chapters. You won't regret it.
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This novel is really uninteresting, so much so that I actually had to take a break and listen to the new Drake album. To nobody's surprise, the Drake album was about as interesting as this so I came back to try read this again and then proceeded to die of boredom.This doesn't deserve a detailed review, there's a saying that the opposite of love is not hate but indifference and that more or less encapsulates how I feel about this. Dropped at CH 10 (idk). yawn(0)/5.
The story is is great for now, with very stable updating that I really appreciate by the author. The story is perfectly readable with no grammatical errors and show great potential.
Im caught up with Translations. I really want to like this, I really do. But to soon to judge this story. My first impression of MC is - incompetent and slow-dim witted, perhaps even naive. He behaves like a Newbie Gamer all the way through. Nothing goes as planned. The NPCs know more about the Mechanics then he does - even though he read the guidebook as well. I understand the Author trying to make him seem like a normal person who was dragged into this but he’s a man, get a grip lol.
It’s quite worrying if this gets in politics, I can see him easily getting caught up in unnecessary things.
There is still hope for this novel. If MC group gets overly powerful quickly, so the drama is nothing. Also if MC establishes his npcs as his wives soon. That’d save this novel. (Because obviously they’re going to be courted after) I really like these first 4-5 girls. They each have their own personality. I’m glad MC not a pervert but it wouldn’t hurt to be more dominating.
Quite enjoyable......................................................................................................................................
the beginning is pretty bad, you have no idea what is happening, the mind picture is unclear, overall bad beginning nejdkdkkdkdkdkkddkk