My Daoist Fairy Mother

Very interesting book. I love the way the story develops. Highly recommended!

another story ruined off bad translations, it kinda feels like mtl to me so if might've been just a copy and paste of another novel. I'd recommend not to read unless you can deal with the horrid grammar?

This is my first time the shop owner almost kill inside his shop, funny right, all i mean  novel with a system and selling something inside his shop his almost invisible inside, hahha even though is almost copy with the selling pokemon around the world,, my point here is the host/mc is too weak and the system is weak though, can't even protect mc,

A lot of similarities to SWALLOWED STAR.  The story so far is bad. He has at least 3 pets but basically, all of them disappeared.                    

As of this review, I have read up to chapter 102. Thus far, the story has been phenomenal. No complaints here.I thoroughly enjoy the methodical approach when it comes to explaining the backstory. The pacing sits very comfortably between unbearably slow to the point that everyone forgot (ex. Hey guys, remember this small detail about 350 chapters ago? Martial God Asura, I’m looking at you...) and way too fast to where the backstory feels like an integral parallel format of the novel. Very well done.My one and only HUGE gripe about this work is the grammar and spelling issues. They are not too common, but just plentiful enough to make you reread portions of a chapter. Big no no.4.4 / 5Keep up the great work, author-san.

This story is another hidden gem on web novel!?I can see it up there with R:EFN in the future. Not sure how to explain this but the writing style really reminded me of R:EFN. Perhaps it was your inspiration? Whatever the case this story is wonderful.The author has a way of keeping the story so interesting you don't want to stop, or if you do, you can't help but wonder what happened next and come back... I say this as someone who has read good stories in the beginning and eventually forgets about them.. Not everyone can create that captivating atmosphere in their story so 5 stars on that.The pacing of the story is very good and the characters are hilarious! 5 stars!Some very very minor polishing is needed on some details here and there, but overall this story is near excellent.Thank you,Keep up the good work!