Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all
Fluff Overload!! Cuteness is Everywhere and the World is Full of Sugar!!Only Drawback is MC's Old Man Syndrome!! Makes you want to Shout!! : )Loving the Interactions!! You just know.. MC getting a Jobs gonna turn Bad..
Although too early to review. It's from the same author as demon lord's reincarnation and that too a prequel so I am excited about it. Although it might look cliche but things are more difficult than MC's previous world and the first real fight did take him everything to fight. Hope author continues the momentum...
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The story is very well thought out and stable the character design is is one of the best i have seen..... the world background is great and i really like the small details you throw in there at times, i would have gave it a complete 5 stars if there wasnt a few misspellings but those aren't really a big deal (seeing how i probably misspelled a few thing while writing this) to me, other than that its agreat story!
Love this kind of stories and the characters were hilarious in the middle of the zombie apocalypse, although I suggest using grammarly to improve the grammar mistakes, and use capitalized letter at the start of a paragraph. Some of it were already good, keep up the good work! and also good luck on the contest!