Book is nice
Okey to start of the premise of the story got me interested to check this story out. However the first chapter made me want to drop it like it’s hot. But decided to keep at it since you usually need 30-100 chapters in these kind of stories to get a real opinion.
Let’s just say that while the writing did get better it honestly went from horrible to really bad and thats with an editor.
The story overall is quite good though the MC and his choices are simply mindboogling. For instance a ton of information, settings and background is like how it is often done forced into us in large quantities but when it comes to the MC all rules and logic has no effect.
I could probably go on and on about stuff like this but overall the story is decent but the writing is killing it, being similar to google translate or somthing on top of the fact that some words seems to be there simply to add to word count. I do appreciate that it has gotten better but in almost all the chapters it would seem a simple thing like reading what has been written would fix things. Like how in one of the chapters around ch 20 it is mentioned that Ashlyn is eating her dead parents only for the later part saying she’s eating the same diet as her parents.
every sentence is followed by pic related drivel, interestingly enough this filler driver almost never has any mistakes, hmm. so can you stop this author. your grammar and writing quility is at best 1-2 stars and magically this filth is atleast 4. I don't know if you are copy pasting it from somewhere or using ai but its nothing more than padding. so please stop
if you are Chinese and you hate every other country then your own then you will probably keep liking this novel past chapter 358 but if you are not then don't bother reading it because you will just waist your time. Went from being a great read to the Chinese being racist again.
Plot 4/5
Character Development 5/5
Romance 4/5 (Hated the point where he changed her memories)
Comedy 5/5 (It's perfect, not too much)
Action Scenes 3/5 (Need more improvement)
It's a soild 4. There are a few things that author should work one but still I'm really loving it so far. Author did said it's a HAREM and as a fan of decent harem novels. I think it'll be a good one since author is very skilled in explaining characters..
sigh idk why It's so underrated smh.
This is so disgustingly trash full of drama reverse ra- pe and ra pe victim being lover you know where this is going the drama part the mc keeps on leaving women he slept with in dangerous situation mostly the married women and their daughter with trash or abusive husband (mom-daughter) they are so dumb more like retard just like the author. The authors keeps doing trash sh !Ts just for disgusting drama when mc can just end it with him bringing them to his home to those with whom he has slept with but nah he leaves the lanlord with the husband who will sell his own wife just for some penny (Mc knows her husband sold her to someone when he lost a beta to someone ) yet knowing that insteat of taking her with him he just gives her his number and leaves bro says he hates cliches yet is the one who is doing that just to create drama
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This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!
The novel’s writing and background were good, but it was quite boring as the mc didnt meet any other players for a long time. However if you’re fine with the mc basically being alone for 50+ chaps, it’s pretty good.
Amazing story and really unique concept
I love baseball stories. This is one of my favorites. Usually would leave longer and more detailed review but I don’t want to spoil anything. Just read it and that’s telling enough. 10/10. Also author give me more chapters.
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