One of my favorite reading on that platform.The story is quite original, I didn't thought it would be taking that direction. The writing quality is almost perfect, the only star I dropped (would have liked put 4.5/5) due to some little mistake but they are rare.The only thing I regret is discovering that novel right before the exam of the author. The wait will seem so long ^^So good luck, I pray for you.
hi author I just want to ask if there will be harem or no ..............................................................................
The story is Kind of meh. Grammar and Vocabulary need work.The Characters are kind of stagnant, not sure about this part, sometimes the story is good.
I enjoy this book alot, the character and plot development are top-notch
One of the worst novels Ive read. The positiv is the world description. Otherwise, complete and uther garbage. There really is no logic in the MC persona, after 6 chapters the ^world^ isntbreally described. The system isnt really a system with interaction, the MC just knows through the system. . The plot (if there really is one) is so full of holes you can drive a truck through it.
I am a simple guy, as long as I enjoyed the story then I like it, and so far there is consistency in the story and the author really find the time to write how and why it is happening, the author explaining the situation so that it will not look like it is a forced development or plot.
PLEASE ADD MORE I absolutely adore this series it’s got everything you could possibly want, OP MC, game lit style, system, reincarnation this is amazing
not going to lie.the first 2 chps were kinda boring? IDK but they weren't that interesting but as I read on it was dope...I mean a stupid OP MC that hides his power..i like **** like..only problem is that this guy is an idiot..dont do it...keep him cool smart and lazy....add some romance and fluff and if harem keep it small...but do build the romance and dont do some wuxia **** and separate the lovers or the reason they fall in love is because they dude is strong and the chick is hot...build the damn **** or just no romance.. anyway goodluck..its interesting..
**: I cant help but imagine the hamster as the same one from overlord
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I really liked the plot of the story it is comical and refreshing.The author has good pacing for this story and the world build-up is also nice. I really liked the bulb line though. hope you continue to publish the book ???
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interesting story, with a mc, that at least for now not super powerful, which is appreciated, because otherwise it would only be boring, which is appreciated. Yes, the females of the harem are not human. (girls with octopus faces, or aranachet ...) So I do not expect, that finds ecchi scenes, not even less +18