this book is good is worth to try, just too bad the mc can't play low key haha.
this book is good is worth to try, just too bad the mc can't play low key haha.
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I think the chars are fun so far, and the writing is believable and neat! I'm not nearly caught up but this book has been a breath of fresh air recently!
From what I have read, this might become a best seller on this platform soon! Author, you only need to release faster! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The writing is quit good.
Story development so far is slower than a turtle.
Since the development is so slow we dont know that much about the mc, but he used his phone, which is supposed to be his cheat according to the synopsis, 1 time in the first 18 years. That brings some questions for me...
The updates are a joke since it is only in the trial phase.
The world setting is ok I guess, though I'm still confused how some things work.
The biggest minus is the really slow passed writing so far. I hope it picks up some momentum.
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Overall it's an extremely enjoyable story, with a good concept, interesting characters, and great story development. Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next upload. Keep up the good work!
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awesome idea and had a wonderful start but as time moves on in the story we rarely get more about the actual plans for his kingdom and him gathering resources like I would like to see. the battles seem to take way to long the most recent ones against the barons especially is getting old fast.
I think this story is something that many would enjoy. Action packed with loads of information right off the bat. Me personally i prefer the show don't tell standard and having mystery and things revealed over time. I think if you don't and simply want a straight forward narrative this is definitely the story. To me the weakest part is the combat scenes sometimes the timing is slightly off, this is typically due to the wording sometimes being past tense then referring to actions that should have already happened ex. saying a character dashed forward with an attack, then in the next line saying he grabbed his sword and dashed forward, that time of thing. All in all I could see many people enjoying this novel, so keep it up author.