i really loved it aspecialy the pacing fast quality ass pacing with a competent mc that is not an arrogant asshole nor chasing down some harem for stupid reasons and just a genuinly nice fic liked how you used other light novels to create the world more in your favor so that we imagine but cant say its like a certain thing which allows you to throw of our expektation sometimes
Playing in a real VRMOORPG world. Kinda like Shuras Wrath and King of the Battlefield. Different POVs not only focused on grinding of the mc etc.Seems promising hoping for consistent content.
The story is good, if it was to be rated out of 10 I woulda given it a 6, my only issue is the mc himself and his harem member, I can ignore my dislike for harem in general but the problem is how the mc is written and also how some of the harem members are gotten. you will understand what I mean when you read up to ch 9, I dont exactly know how to explain cus I dont want to think right now. But from what iv read so far it has potential. this is some the past me would enjoy whole heartedly, but it seems the more variety of novels I've read the more difficult it is to be overly impressed. this is something that a new reader can start on and would definitely like. Its okay. Also it's weird how some of the other characters are written better than the protagonist.
Descriptions are amazing! Even though I'm not a military fan, there's a very clear image within my mind.
However, do note that most webnovel readers enjoy short and snappy paragraphs to quickly read though.
Looking forward to more from this author!
This is so interesting?? I'm so inlove with the characters especially Zion ?? Can't wait for more updates ?
this is interesting keep it up you are trying. I've never seen a great writer like you and you say this is your first one.cheers up
I love it. I hope the author can please publish more often. I' m curious to know what's going to happen in the next chapter. Fighting!!
I want to see MARVIN kicking the ass of the bullies that beat him so bad. let me see his sis get marry to a multi millionaire! and get op fast you got time halt!
A história e realmente boa, mas logo depois ela começou a fica tediosa não sei se foi só comigo ou não. Mas estarei apoiando o autor em sua nova história
This novel is fantastic cant wait for there to be much much more
A writer myself, I have to say this novel was quite interesting. It was quite unexpected at a particular point, after the plot had been developing for a while. You see I though they were going to go accomplish their goal, but they were actually just following along with their predetermined destiny. I was pleasantly surprised by the creativity of the author and the uniqueness of the characters. 10/10 would recommend to a friend. 11/10 would continue to read.
I have read till 1334 ( RAW ), it was released few hours ago. I wont give any spoilers. MC keeps on trying to lose money but everytime something *new* happens and he gains money. Take it as slice of life not as business management.
Semi-spoiler --
companies MC has at 1334 chapter -
1. 2 Gaming companies, 1 VR game company
2. House rental company
3. Cafe + computer
4. "Suffering" Travels company ( Newest )
5. Investors company
6. Company than supports indie game developers
7. Twitch like company
8. Webnovel like company
9. Movie shooting company
10. E sports like company
11. Phone company
12. Physical experiance shops
13. Gym
14. Food delivary
15. Delivary company
16. steam ( gaming ) like company
Companies are written in random, dont worry about knowing which company is next.
Spoiler end ---
You might think Author would ignore some of them but author tries to combine them.
I'll give an example -
"After she completed shooting ad for new game she came to new home ( by home rental company ). After practicing "certain Gym" equipment, she went to play with "certain brand's" VR device"
Author also tries to give reasons for not falling to "linkage" with other companies.
I really hope author wont launch more companies, it would be harder to not ignore some of them