whelp I don't need to read this one to find out what happens since the description spoils the entire novel..............................................
this novel is just amazing. storyline, world building, characters everything. just one thing apart from the language problem is the MC's stats sheet. it's no longer consistent and confusing. I'm already lost because the rewards and stats after the rewards don't match especially towards the later parts
Shut up and take my review.Giving Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless, Shameless reviews.
Is it fun to just steal a story and take it as your own?
If you are not crative enough to write your own story who cares,
but to steal someone elses work for undeserved fame is just disgusting to the extreme!
If one can spam fake 5 stars reviews,
Does it mean is ok tk spam one stars as well?
Im am taking that logic as a yes....
Shameless author just how many accts you have?
Of course excluding the fresh bloods
Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
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I really like the story, despite being a genre already used with some regularity, it's different and original at the same time, because it doesn't portray a transmigration or reincarnation.
I hope the author develops the story further so we can get addicted to it.
Just here to offset all the 5 star bs. People are giving away 5 stars way too easily these days. Take the 5 stars and 1 stars with a grain of salt.
The writing's got room for improvement (as others here may have noticed), but as of this review's posting, whatever flaws were present don't detract from the content itself too much. Additionally, it may be best to limit allusions to existing works in pop culture to a minimum. I particularly recommend looking up comma splices, run-on sentences and sentence fragments on Google since these are the common mistakes I came across in your work.
PS - if you'd like a more detailed go-over, kindly PM me over Discord or something :)
HarHar Mahadev
Best webnovel I read in a while
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