This is sad....Sad that such a good story has yet to be recognized, honestly this is well written the character development is well, its emotional with drama. The character development is well balanced..slow and yet not too slow. Plus, the [possible ] love interest is not some slutty or unrealistic character [love at first sight...****]. ALso The MC is quiet interesting.Suggestion: -There is too much secrets..kinda annoying..[ex: the secret family of the MC, the characters past] try to reveal them.-I personally ship MC and fait together..make it sweet and fluff, add some romance..[just dont make fait some korean style female lead that was used by her previous lover and then abandoned..in fact no previous lovers at all...! I'm begging no korean style tragic angst ****..keep this happy]. The beautiful maiden...Lady fate came and saved her beloved mortal..-Get it?-Bash..yep I want some bash..bash MC's past fiance/family...[I mean they werent there when he was broken] and no redemption..just straight up bash and they regret it.-Dont make Nev and her brothers past angsty..just sad.-This might sound weird but in the later chps make MC start a family with love interest..maybe 3 kids.. Anyway I said my piece...love your stuff,,i do hope more people read this...also dont make this angsty/tragic/korean style [NO offense to koreans but most of their romance is rape/betrayal/separation...cheating and then back together..total ****]..try to keep this happy and fluff and romantic..we all need some romance in our lives.Good luck and Good show.
Very cool slice of life story and interesting writing style. The characters are all realistic with each of them having a significance of their own. The character interactions are great and the main characters are very likable.
Hear me out. I haven't read it yet but that synopsis was amazing and successfully piqued my curiosity, I just hope the story is good and the author upload chapters regularly. (The stars I have given belong to the synopsis and I wish there was a stable update )
the story progressed fine at first, then it became a sorrowful pity party of unfulfilled threats and failed urgency that has the slow burn of a middle school fight. I like the story but I have read at least 8 chapters of petty squabbling, abuse, pointless fevers, and situations that could have been better if more communication and trust was shown instead of naivety.
Based on what I read, this novel has quite detailed and vivid imagery, especially when describing each character's pain or reactionary. The prologue is pretty good, to be honest especially with the pirate's settings.As for the MC, I think he is fine for now and I like that he has a close relationship with someone. But, I hope I can see more about the background of his life and further development.For the cons, this is my personal taste, but I guess I need to add more detail when showing things such as objects like the pirate ships and character appearance. Personally, I am kind of hard to imagine their appearance since I love to see a well-detailed appearance.I think that's all I have to say, thank you very much and Keep up the good work!!!
I hope he wins the war and ends up controlling everything. But I'm worried about that devouring domain demon. What if he ends up becoming a puppet after all and gets controlled by that thing? What about his supposed friends and allies will they still support him? I mean its human nature to fear and hate the unknown ur things you dont understand. I hope he will be alright.
Why there no harem tagggu i wan the haremmm tagggu if he trap he seduce manny manny poople hmm. I want hareeemmmuuu its been so long since i seee a harem storrryu
The story so far is pretty intresting and the concept of the cultivation stay preety consistant. I also like how the intrection between linger and mc show each other and how they support each other.
Great story. Very relaxing and funny. keep it up author
I've read this more than 9 months ago, The plot about having a Mc and the protagonist of the story his in and the Mc stealing the stuff of the protagonist trying to overpower him is quite unique, the Mc also isn't a arrogant and dumb one who provokes everybody, I really hope the author can continue this he can
Love reading this! The quality of writing is good, I love the story and the characters. I also loves how the background is described. Love Love Love
Very good book overall (at least in the earl phase) ,good development, not many errors in the grammar as well,it's kinda like a system story but without one ,the book is interesting, can't wait for more.