It is perfect and hidden piece of gem.... Tho the only caveat is the fact that every person he meets is another genius.
Also MC is a bit too forgiving, gets punished for something he did not do but forgives them not to forward his personnel motives but cause of a little girl who could not even speak to defend him..... You can't just be altruistic always, but must give a read to it.
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Idk, I thought that it would be funny them all giving him random things to try and hide that they themselves are weak af. Like in the description with the coin etc However, what annoyed me greatly is how it went from funny to them using him for money. Like it's fine if you want him to stay in your sect because even if it is a sht thing to do the mc is still benefiting from it so it can sort of be forgiven. However, to me this is the limit. Not only using him by lying to him but then acc making him a fcking money printer... I can already see that when he masters alchemy, smithing etc they are gonna use him again and again. Tbh this pisses me off because its gon from a light-hearted and funny vibe to instant scum. I would rather it be like that story where he has a famous af master who only picked him because of his poor attribute only for him to have this talent. Making the master have him keep trying to random stuff to slow him down, read random things etc with the mc being like this and finding comprehension in everything and the master's reaction to it. Instead of this vibe of making the mc dumb af and constantly using him for there own gains.... SO yeah
I don't feel conflict when I am reading this. I don't like that he is into music because unfortunately, I cannot listen to music in my mind as I read this piece of text. I also do not like the urban setting in a cultivation novel. World background is a 2/5 and not a 1/5 since there is a character that shares martial arts secrets with the rest of the world; usually, in cultivation novels, sects hold martial arts books as secrets. Not so in this novel, it is a breath of fresh air as it shows that there are characters that are willing to share with others. I do not really like this book. It is, however, an okay read in case you have nothing else to do.
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