Fix your early chapters bro, couldn't handle it due to bad english, typos, and grammar problems besides it might help boost your novel to some extent.
There is no soul to these works anymore.
I feel like I am being fed plastic foods instead of real food.
Qidian seriously needs to rethink its goals.
Why did the updates stop??
Anyway the book is great while some arcs last a bit 2 long it is still enjoyable . The characters are interesting and the world doesn’t revolve around the Main char
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If you turn of your brain and read for some faceslapping it is enjoyable but there is clearly very little though going into it. characters are flat and motivations for/outcomes of their actions are often extremely illogical. anything goes as long as it creates conflicts to drive the story.
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I HATE these live stream type novels. Most chapters are just reactions from the audience, we only get a few lines to show the development of the story.
Sounds good
Overall 4.2
There were quite a few mistakes (mostly writing quality) though it doesnt really matter it makes me pause to read it a few more times to make sure im reading it right (for example: she instead of he) since sometimes i might read wrong or get confused
I enjoyed reading this book, it keeps the readers Reading. my only problem is with the grammar. I look forward to reading future chapter that you put out.
Have a nice day author San
Hmmmm, One of my friends has written a good story, a tale of a man with a beast trapped inside of him, I can understand. The exploration of his development seems to be the main focus of the story.
Good job Swan