Nice story but bro ngl u ruined my life with the pay to read chapters
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I didn't like it to be honest, MC is as dumb as a rock and his system is way overpowered and can't let you be emerged in the story, the world building is ...well not good... anyway U didn't like it... and thanks
One of the best trial so far; great premise and good story development. MC started off with a better and logical background which is plus itself.Writing Quality ★ ★ ★• Though the story is great some words are jumbled or are connected with each other example: (after,hedied)(let go.He run) and some words that aren't good with eah other or a little bit confusing.Story Development ★ ★ ★ ★ ★•Though it has a similar system as some novel here which has like collecting EXP; it has different story to it which isn't a copy paste of other novels. The MC started of from the bottom and is continuously rising through his EXP collecting. Though there are some clichés it isn't to the point that it's on every chapter.Character Design ★ ★ ★ ★•MC's quite smart (surprisingly) and is rational to what he's doing (surprisingly). He's not lazy and is very hard-working due to his EXP colllecting system, not like the other MC with system that always complains like a child who always wanted to be spoonfed. Anyway, MC is calculative with his move, though he has poor roots and vitality, he still compensate it with his EXP collections.Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★•No comment hereWorld Background ★ ★ ★ ★ ★•It's the average xianxia/xuanhuan world building where it started off from a small town to a bigger sect to another country. That's every chinese xianxia/xuanhuan in a nutshell. But, I applaud the author for integrating newer sects and not using generic sects.Overall 4.4, though this may change in the future.
If you've nothing better to do you could give it a read but don't expect a well written story.The MC is OP to the point that nothing matters. The story basically consists of the MC just leveling up so fast that the reader will get whiplash. There is no suspense or meaning to the story. There is just the slightest hint that an actual story might be in this novel in the 20th chapter but I don't know if that'll hold true or is just an accident on the authors part. The world, system, and other characters could be interesting if the author took the time to actually think about them but they are glossed over for the most part.
Sometimes I imagine these guys go thousands of years without a shower, without brushing their teeth, coming out of a cave and discovering they've forgotten how to speak. That would indeed be a taboo creature.
ok so...
1.Translation Quality, not the greatest but not bad a lot of mixed up names and also wrong words used in some sentences etc but still better than MTL
2. Stability of updates, of updates so far are ok but also not that great and i say that because we get 2 chapters a day which is good but those chapters are 12 hrs apart which might as well feel like 1 chapter a day.
3. Story Development, so far story's pacing is pretty good that's all.
4. Character Design, the characters in the story so far are good and not as annoying as other stories.
5. world background, as of chapter 80 not much is known of the world we know of very few locations and those are only briefly mentioned.
6. as for why i gave this novel a 1 star is to more effect the overall value that it currently has, we got people just throwing out 5 stars without actualling judging the novel etc so i think people need to throw out 1 stars to counter said people that think everything is gold
Please keep up this type of good work and keep the updating steadily..... There are a lot of writers those who give up halfway.....
Key words to note here (all the words that are capitalized):
Wish
God
Devil
Confusion
Corpses
Irons
Deserts
Impossible
Immoral
Gamer
Motivation
Motivate
Views
Cook
This has a great story line and always has me on my toes. It's one of my favorite novels so far. I think this could become a popular book one day
Hey, the title of the book really calls for itself! Might as well give it a try. Realistic Fiction is really the scopes of our real-life happenings. Highly Recommended.
It said Wine Store??? Now MC has started to do the Cooking and Refining Pills also?? That's completely different from what it initially started from.