It's crap not sure why rating is so high... well i guess since author can delete bad reviews helps. It jumps from on thing to another too quick, mc stutters like a retard for no reason, anyway read if you iq is low you might like it.
The plot of the story is quite interesting, so was the first and second chapter. The way the author describes the scenes is pretty good too. I am curious to see what will happen next to the protagonist and how this story will become a murder mystery story. Although it would be better if the chapters were updated more often. Keep up the good work author! :)
Our MC is a poor, but good looking student, and his family is poor, plus his dad is sick. Oh, yes, and the beautiful younger sister, who is a pain in the neck. Luckily, the MC picks up an obsessed gaming system and our story starts from there.
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Another fantastic story with a great plot and storyline This one has me on the edge of my seat “literally” lol I cant wait foe the nexT part to come out
Now that the story has ended: REVIEW UPDATE!Look, I'm a Gambit shill. I loved gambit when i first started reading it, and I loved gambit till the moment it ended.This novel, is my personal definition of 'a good time!'Really nice characters, cathartic character development, nice humour, and an author you'll love to hate (jk, inside joke). The world isn't the most detailed, and the plot doesn't require a single brain cell to comprehend, buuuut i think thats part of what makes it so fun, so carefree, and also gives you the opportunity to just fall in love with the characters.The novel is based entirely on the characters and how they'd react when thrown into different scenarios or how their relationships change with time and with events. Its like a typical found family story, but its just so fun that I love it. And it also just follows the rule of cool, and i love it. If you're looking for charming characters and a fun time, read this.If you're looking for something that'll make you wrack your brain, then well, this isn't it, but you should read it anyway.Uhhh, here stop my incoherent rambles, uhhhh bye?I'll miss this story.And "Is that so?""Is that so." is one of the most fun catchphrases ever I'll die on this hill you devilled ben
Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel.First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you.Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters.Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world.Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided.I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.
There was someone who once told me that "things shouldn't be made out of impulse but with much deliberation and researches"That's what comes to my mind as I read this beautiful piece.The efforts and emotions put in each word and lines is overwhelmingly good. I felt different mix emotions reading this.I really 100000000x recommended this story to everyone out there.And I would really look forward to more update.Thank you author for writing this wonderful novel and I hope to see this reach higher levels. This novel deserve a lot of things.
This book is excellent science fiction.The author portrays a vast science fiction universe. I've seen people say that the early part of the novel is a bit boring, but as the plot progresses, the book clearly goes from the average to the masterpiece. I hope we can get it on the shelves soon.??Here's an interesting thing.The author(yuan tong) recommended
I hope that someday I will see your novel on live broadcast or anime at least because it is very great out of all the configurations Oh my God really you are a genius
Good book please make more ......................... ..................................................................................