Nah I didn't like it
It's kind of strange the stupidity of the protagonist even though he proclaims himself to be smart and he said he was a gamer but he doesn't act like someone who has a brain not to mention that the writing is kind of confusing since you can't understand when it's a thought and when it's a speech and also the protagonist talks while fighting so you lose a sense of time just like when you're having movement in fights it's hard to understand what they're doing as you mention some things that happened in the fight after the action was done
I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. The story is very captivating. Keep up the good work author
hey everyone Author here it's my first time writing a novel as english is not my first language i try to write as good as possible please do suggest what can i do to improve the story and thank you y'all for reading
The concept is good. But, I get bored over time. MC get new talent, show it to the world, get famous, and go back to daily life, repeat. There's no character development at least until chapter 290~. MC still the same guy who lazy to do anything.
Seriously, IDK what to enjoy in this novel. Comedy? just a few of them, Romance? non existence. Slice of life? Not realistic.
I'd rather read face slapping cliche novel than this.
But, I love the concept. Modern world kinda like rpg, no romance harem.
If you have some recommendation like this kind of novel. Please tell me
Especially if there is character development tag on it
3* for both Stability and World Background. This novel reminds me of the concept of Shamless the TV show, with a little bit of a sci-fi twist. The MC is part of a financially struggling household of 6, being the eldest of the 4 siblings. He is also slow-witted and has fast scheme ideas to make money in order to help around. But apparently most of his schemes don't pan out as intended and ends up wasting more money than actually making some. That is until he meets Transdimensional Marketing Co. which hires him to market their futuristic products through his content creator platform. Sounds great right? However, the execution is like the MC, idiotic. I guess it's supposed to be a comedic novel, but instead it falls flat as slap stick. None of what was written made me laugh, but instead question the MC's mental health as he fumbles around with a great opportunity on his lap and wastes its potential by being stupid about it. Overall, great concept, but I think even the novel doesn't know what genre it's supposed to be, lol. Verdict: Dropped.
it's really good, at least for me, it's better than the rest of the new ones in this batch of trial read.
It has the same "feel" as "senior brother is too steady" except with the system as the plot device.
it's been a long time since I write a novel review in faint hope that the work is gonna get picked.
Let me see...
System ✓
Reincarnation ✓
World Bulding ✓
Weak to Strong ✓
Magic ✓
Insects ✓
Hmm... It's a yes from me! Hope this money-grabbing site selects this gem!
well the overall story was so good indead im totally falling from chair table......
love it so nicely...........
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great writing quality with good sense of humour
perfect start of story with great continuation
characters is interesting (a lot of changes in emotions)
stabile updating with great new content in each chapter
great world background in VRMMO game as well as real world as story is in game and real life
continue hard (hopefully pleasant) work
very pretty cover. The flow of dialogue is smooth, and the authors control over the characters in enviable. I do feel like the synopsis could have been more detailed
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Please update and I bet your each chapter have of potential of 5 star .
I love this story. Suspense is killing more .
Please come out of hiatus.