The story is very good with a very easy understanding world and system with a truly smart main character that use his ability well. To summarize what i want to say i want to see more of it.
In all honesty, I really like the start up of your work. The moment that the mistress died in the first part was exquisitely well-done! No words can truly describe how happy I am reading such a wonderful chapter/story. It's even better than "I was reincarnated as a sword", for me HAHAHA
The only things that I can advise are you need to edit the commas and periods in sentences. There are a few of them out there, so be sure to keep an eye out of them. Another thing worth mentioning is...nah, actually, the story is good. I like it. I like it alot. Keep up the good work, mate!
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So... I think this is my second review, but the story seems to be going great and even if it just another typical Urban Cultivator style novel (even though he is using magic) it is doing the trope justice.
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This is a very generic story with little to none creativity above the standard. Characters have little development with new ones that wouldn't even need to exist in the story
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What's the difference between Parazyte and OP parazyte???
Cliche with huge blatant racism. I understand having nationalisms but this transcends that and just make it super racist where the mc would let foreigner die a gruesome death but stops it because he sees some Chinese people in the group
This novel is of my taste and it's gone just like this sigh
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